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Array ( [sid] => 68322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => youll get yours [time] => 2004-10-21 08:07:38 [hometext] => recently i was beat up for no reason. i was sucker punched to my temple when i wasnt looking and i was basically out to it.... well i was kicked a few times and kneed and stuff... well anyway the wierd thing is i wrote this the day before... [bodytext] => digging my grave,
feeling like a slave
to the world, i wanna hurl.
taking a slap in the face,
theres not even a trace
of doubt ive found that i cannout do without
so give me a shout,
yell out your lungs if youre old or young
it doesnt matter, as long as you can
deal the rhyme, everytime.
dont diss the player
unless you want the game to become your slayer.
you want a fight? it will be a waste
all you will get is a slap in the face,
your a$$ kicked and your family dissed.
the world is mine, yo.
i will hurt you in ways you will never know.
stuff you and all your friends,
your mouth will be your end.
you can hurt me but i have friends too
whats done to me will be done to you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 6 [informant] => kritic_killer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

youll get yours

Contributed by kritic_killer on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:07:38 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

digging my grave,
feeling like a slave
to the world, i wanna hurl.
taking a slap in the face,
theres not even a trace
of doubt ive found that i cannout do without
so give me a shout,
yell out your lungs if youre old or young
it doesnt matter, as long as you can
deal the rhyme, everytime.
dont diss the player
unless you want the game to become your slayer.
you want a fight? it will be a waste
all you will get is a slap in the face,
your a$$ kicked and your family dissed.
the world is mine, yo.
i will hurt you in ways you will never know.
stuff you and all your friends,
your mouth will be your end.
you can hurt me but i have friends too
whats done to me will be done to you.

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2004-10-21 08:07:38]
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Re: youll get yours (User Rating: 1 )
by espeeayzee on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:03:42 AM AEST
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Ironic.....funny how things move in circles, maybe this was the reason you were beat up

Re: youll get yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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Or maybe not, espaaezee[whatever].

Get even, or perhaps not. Up to you. I wouldn't stand for it, let me tell you.

Write one about them apologizing and see what happens...

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