Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:36:55 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 68257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Empty [time] => 2004-10-20 17:44:05 [hometext] => I'm feeling so empty...PLEASE COMMENT [bodytext] => When was the last time
there was something on your mind
to tell an empty soul

The people yell
the people sing
for what?
an empty gesture

We reach for shelter
we reach for protection
from what?
an empty hand

Each time a cheer erupts
a hand flings out
and snatches away our happiness
but why?
and empty heart

A presence lingers
a light burns bright
why?
to console our
empty soul [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Empty

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When was the last time
there was something on your mind
to tell an empty soul

The people yell
the people sing
for what?
an empty gesture

We reach for shelter
we reach for protection
from what?
an empty hand

Each time a cheer erupts
a hand flings out
and snatches away our happiness
but why?
and empty heart

A presence lingers
a light burns bright
why?
to console our
empty soul

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-10-20 17:44:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:55:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

so very good and so very true..some are afraid of happiness..just because they think they might lose it..
what a great write! yes!!!

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Minerrva on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:23:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Someone who can write like that can't be entirely empty. ^^ I concur.

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:18:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very good poem, well written and well presented too, I felt each and every word written, in my point of view "You are not empty at all, but it's just a period of time and you will get over it and that's for sure" and if you want any help in getting over this emptiness you can talk to me (If you want ofcourse).

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good write. i have written many poems about this myself.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com