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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Alone
[time] => 2004-10-20 15:17:44
[hometext] => Please comment... it would help to know I'm not completely alone.
[bodytext] => Isn't death so welcoming;
Who would know I'm gone?
If the world's a chess board;
Then I am just a pawn.
---
I'm useless and ugly,
Not to mention fat.
Not very talented,
So what's the use in that?
---
Death's doors are open,
Should I just go in?
Maybe there I'll get some peace
Instead of wavering.
---
People say I'm their friend
They like me sure enough
So where are they when I'm all alone?
Busy with other stuff.
---
No-ones here to talk to.
No-one really cares.
Death can come and get me;
Come and get me if it dares.
[comments] => 7
[counter] => 207
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Saz
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 3
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
Alone
Contributed by
Saz
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:17:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Isn't death so welcoming;
Who would know I'm gone?
If the world's a chess board;
Then I am just a pawn.
---
I'm useless and ugly,
Not to mention fat.
Not very talented,
So what's the use in that?
---
Death's doors are open,
Should I just go in?
Maybe there I'll get some peace
Instead of wavering.
---
People say I'm their friend
They like me sure enough
So where are they when I'm all alone?
Busy with other stuff.
---
No-ones here to talk to.
No-one really cares.
Death can come and get me;
Come and get me if it dares.
Copyright ©
Saz
... [
2004-10-20 15:17:44]
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Re: Alone
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by jada on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:29:19 PM AEST
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I used to feel like I was alone but if you feel like that then everyone esle around you will seem like that too. I like this poem but what is with death. you'll never know when you candle of life will burn out but make the best of life making each and every day count. And enjoy your life have some fun like i learned.
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Re: Alone
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:33:59 PM AEST
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You know you're a poet
when you can write
about despair like this.
You're not alone
in having these feelings.
But I have no idea how I
get thru it myself.
It's not easy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Alone
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:04:24 PM AEST
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You know your talented when you can write like this. And trust me, there are always people there. Even tho it may seem like theres not, there really is. I may not know you, but even I am here for you. I am always available to talk. I am usually online at
Sharpieworshiper, or e-mail me at
lightning52m@yahoo.com
Much Love,
Younger yet Older |
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Re: Alone
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:09:06 PM AEST
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| okeedokee..I came, I saw I read. you can use the stones life puts in your path as things to step over and excercise and grow stronger, and keep on, or trip and fall on your face and stay there. All alone in a pigs eye!!! You have all of our attention..NOW WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO WITH IT? |
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Re: Alone
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:18:13 PM AEST
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Hey hun! Just letting you know that You aren't alone, and that you can always talk to me, cuz I'll be MORE than willing to listen. I know what ya mean w/ the whole friend thing. I'm always odd man out when my friends get together. They never think to call. I used to feel the same way about myself, and sometimes still do, but it gets better. I know it's hard to see that at the moment, but it will eventually. But suicide is no the only resort to solve your problems. Sometimes a counselor can help. Just someone to talk to and help you make sense of everything. And what if you try, and death doesn't come and "get you?" Then you're left in a mess that you can't fix. Trust me, it's not worht it. I've tried 3 times. So, I'm here to talk to hun, if you'd like to chat! ;-)
Felix |
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Re: Alone
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:26:54 PM AEST
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Your definately not alone with this feeling....i always feel this way....great write....if you ever need to talk to some please PM me or IM at x0xbabydancerx0x....i'm always here fi you need someone to talk to....EXCELLENT JOB!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Alone
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by Starlilly on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:30:58 AM AEST
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wow ~ this is very moving
and very relateable
Great write! |
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