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Array ( [sid] => 68222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Admidst a non-changing World [time] => 2004-10-20 14:29:43 [hometext] => I get so lonely that all I have is my thoughts for company. Comments would be greatly appreciated. [bodytext] => Lost in a sea of dreams
Knowing not what is real
Nothings ever what it seems
Everythings painfully surreal
---
Twisted emotions, snatched away
As quick as the blink of an eye
One lonely feeling is left to stay
Lonely, as people walk straight by
---
As time goes by, we learn to fear
Fear life itself; acceptance; friends
Reaching out for something so near
But can't reach... so it just ends
---
Is it possible to live and be happy?
Can we find peace with ourselves?
To live with eachother harmoniously
In all of life's blistering swells
---
Life's endeavors are bitter-sweet...
Deal with it. There's nothing you can do. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Saz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Admidst a non-changing World

Contributed by Saz on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:29:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Lost in a sea of dreams
Knowing not what is real
Nothings ever what it seems
Everythings painfully surreal
---
Twisted emotions, snatched away
As quick as the blink of an eye
One lonely feeling is left to stay
Lonely, as people walk straight by
---
As time goes by, we learn to fear
Fear life itself; acceptance; friends
Reaching out for something so near
But can't reach... so it just ends
---
Is it possible to live and be happy?
Can we find peace with ourselves?
To live with eachother harmoniously
In all of life's blistering swells
---
Life's endeavors are bitter-sweet...
Deal with it. There's nothing you can do.




Copyright © Saz ... [ 2004-10-20 14:29:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Admidst a non-changing World (User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:32:37 PM AEST
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Great writing. Your words are how I feel a lot of times, so being able to relate to someone else's words makes the poem more special...so good job :)


Re: Admidst a non-changing World (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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Very good writing here.
Very thoughtfull.

--Mothy




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