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Array ( [sid] => 68208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thrill Ride [time] => 2004-10-20 13:24:57 [hometext] => i feel i have to explain this poem: it was written whilst i was anticipating a trip to the fun fair with my boyfriend, and this was where he finally ended it [bodytext] => together we need so much courage to go on
as the ride begins i'm nervous
but i see you sitting by my side
it starts off slowly, but soon speeds up
i am smiling
you are with me
we go so high and drop down so low
my stomach churns
you are still here
i sometimes feel sick
i scream i am so anxious
you are beside me
every corner brings a new surprise
something unexpected but exciting
you are there
lots more twists and turns
you are sharing every moment with me
and i feel so happy to feel what i am feeling
and then it begins to slow down,
everything is now so different
you give me one last look
the brakes are put on,
finally we reach the sad end,
you and i go our seperate ways
alone.

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => clotti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Thrill Ride

Contributed by clotti on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:24:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

together we need so much courage to go on
as the ride begins i'm nervous
but i see you sitting by my side
it starts off slowly, but soon speeds up
i am smiling
you are with me
we go so high and drop down so low
my stomach churns
you are still here
i sometimes feel sick
i scream i am so anxious
you are beside me
every corner brings a new surprise
something unexpected but exciting
you are there
lots more twists and turns
you are sharing every moment with me
and i feel so happy to feel what i am feeling
and then it begins to slow down,
everything is now so different
you give me one last look
the brakes are put on,
finally we reach the sad end,
you and i go our seperate ways
alone.

Copyright © clotti ... [ 2004-10-20 13:24:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thrill Ride (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:38:12 PM AEST
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wow...very interesting...at first i thought it was bf/gf maybe even a friend of yours...no it seems as if its a stranger...that was just great!

please comment on my work too
summer

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