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Array ( [sid] => 68202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Morning After [time] => 2004-10-20 12:32:23 [hometext] => I think most can relate to this write... [bodytext] => The morning after the night before,
Has come a rapping on my door,
Heads full of hammering little men,
Don’t want to ever drink alcohol again.

I felt good last night as I went to bed,
Now all I have is a pain in my head,
Every little noise seems loud like thunder,
Will I feel human again I wonder?

Oh how I hate to feel like this,
Maybe I can get rid of it if I wish?
I’ve been wishing all day but here it stays,
I don’t think it’ll budge for the rest of the day.

Eyes feel tired like I’ve had no sleep,
Feel like collapsing into a great, big heap,
Whoever created hangovers needs a good slap,
After a great time I always feel so crap.

Oh how I wish I didn’t drink so much,
But I was enjoying the feel of alcohols touch,
Now I regret enjoying myself,
As now in ill feeling I have so much wealth.

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The Morning After

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:32:23 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

The morning after the night before,
Has come a rapping on my door,
Heads full of hammering little men,
Don’t want to ever drink alcohol again.

I felt good last night as I went to bed,
Now all I have is a pain in my head,
Every little noise seems loud like thunder,
Will I feel human again I wonder?

Oh how I hate to feel like this,
Maybe I can get rid of it if I wish?
I’ve been wishing all day but here it stays,
I don’t think it’ll budge for the rest of the day.

Eyes feel tired like I’ve had no sleep,
Feel like collapsing into a great, big heap,
Whoever created hangovers needs a good slap,
After a great time I always feel so crap.

Oh how I wish I didn’t drink so much,
But I was enjoying the feel of alcohols touch,
Now I regret enjoying myself,
As now in ill feeling I have so much wealth.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-10-20 12:32:23]
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Re: The Morning After (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:42:19 PM AEST
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Oh can I relate to that, I avoided hangovers by waking up with hang-ons ( still inebriated ) but they always seem to catch up to ya, huh ?
Another nice life write Pixie, certainly relatable.

Nazmythian ~

Re: The Morning After (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:06:11 PM AEST
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Yeah ican relate to this too! nice work pixie.

johnny.

Re: The Morning After (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:26:23 PM AEST
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very well written and true, i only drink once in a blue moon, like average once a year, but i know the bite, had to laugh at your giving the person who created hangovers a slap lol, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Morning After (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:23:36 PM AEST
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*Smiles*

Hugs
Jenni

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