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Array ( [sid] => 68068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Real Breath [time] => 2004-10-19 12:30:17 [hometext] => time to live....!! [bodytext] => Its time to make my own way back
I've spent my whole life down the wrong track
Time to move ahead and never look back
Said goodbye to the past

Looking for a new breath of air now
Going where ever i dare now
Nothings going to stop me not even me

Pushing when it gets harder no more weakness
Moving forward with total completeness
I see it clearly now gotta jump those hurdles

fight when it gets tough shout it out
No more room for doubt
gotta take a real breath
no more living life afraid of death
Show the world i can stand up

My path is being mapped out by me
No need for another man to give me sympathy
I know what i need
No more being half in it
my senses telling me to dive in it

I know who i am i know what i want
I dont need to read the font
I dont need anothers plan
To tell me who i am

its time to make my way back. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 21 [informant] => x_midnight_x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Real Breath

Contributed by x_midnight_x on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:30:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Its time to make my own way back
I've spent my whole life down the wrong track
Time to move ahead and never look back
Said goodbye to the past

Looking for a new breath of air now
Going where ever i dare now
Nothings going to stop me not even me

Pushing when it gets harder no more weakness
Moving forward with total completeness
I see it clearly now gotta jump those hurdles

fight when it gets tough shout it out
No more room for doubt
gotta take a real breath
no more living life afraid of death
Show the world i can stand up

My path is being mapped out by me
No need for another man to give me sympathy
I know what i need
No more being half in it
my senses telling me to dive in it

I know who i am i know what i want
I dont need to read the font
I dont need anothers plan
To tell me who i am

its time to make my way back.

Copyright © x_midnight_x ... [ 2004-10-19 12:30:17]
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Re: Real Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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good for you, i hope that you make your way back, as I am sure you will, great poem,

pixie xx

Re: Real Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_runaway on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:54:04 AM AEST
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This is a good write, I love the the topic

Laura

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