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Array ( [sid] => 68019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche [time] => 2004-10-19 00:50:36 [hometext] => I have to get out of here. It seems that the world was made to agitate me. Everything, all of it, annoying, frustrating, irratating, useless. I have to get out of here. Too much drama. This all ultimately amounts to nothing anyways. [bodytext] => Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

I am a prisoner of Physics
A prisoner of my lack of Resources
A prisoner of Human nature
A prisoner of Circumstance
And a prisoner of Time

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

Life on Earth only goes in one direction
and I already know what's down that road
I will live and die here, trapped
as it has been since the beginning of our sense of time
Never knowing and never seeing with my own eyes
the Worlds that lay beyond the Earth's Atmosphere

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

Today is just a copy of the day I had before
All roads in this life lead to the same place
Its all been done before, forever repeating
In living for today, we have lost tomorrow for everyone

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface [comments] => 4 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Onslaught [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche

Contributed by Onslaught on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 12:50:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

I am a prisoner of Physics
A prisoner of my lack of Resources
A prisoner of Human nature
A prisoner of Circumstance
And a prisoner of Time

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

Life on Earth only goes in one direction
and I already know what's down that road
I will live and die here, trapped
as it has been since the beginning of our sense of time
Never knowing and never seeing with my own eyes
the Worlds that lay beyond the Earth's Atmosphere

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface

Today is just a copy of the day I had before
All roads in this life lead to the same place
Its all been done before, forever repeating
In living for today, we have lost tomorrow for everyone

Under the sky
I am stranded on the surface




Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2004-10-19 00:50:36]
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Re: Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:44:29 AM AEST
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I have been there before! Well done I loved the title!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Christina Guten Tag!


Re: Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:11:22 AM AEST
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Ich mag Sie, wie Ihr ausgezeichnetes Gedicht


Excellent piece, truly inspirational

ty,
Kelly xx


Re: Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:07:54 AM AEST
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i'm so sick of everything leading back "to the the same place" not alot of people seem to notice it...
this drama thats feeding off of me is driving me nuts...i hate this *****en world and all these *****en people!
great poem though!

Summer


Re: Gestrandet Auf Der Oberfläche (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:48:52 AM AEST
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Guten tag,
I really like this, (i would write my comment in german but its really rusty from lack of pratice, but if i had it i can talk pretty good german.)
anyway i can relate to this as i feel like this alot of the time.

take care

love
Gen xx




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