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Broken Promise
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How do i keep getting
myself in so deep?
How am i letting
myself slip so far down.
Hanging onto the cliff,
in which im about to fall off,
is it too late to say sorry,
and that we can work it out?
Why am i built up,
to the piont where i cant breakdown?
Who can i turn to,
if i keep letting people go?
Please someone,
qiut saying its okay,
qiut telling me what to do,
and where to go.
Serious emotions stir,
im lettin more and more
people down.
Alone, i am the broken promise.
For me, there lies no future.
I cannot see beyond
my mistakes
and hiding behind the lies.
Shattered dreams
and battered hopes,
again i runaway.
Where have i left to go?
Copyright ©
srugglingyoungster
... [
2004-10-18 23:10:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken Promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:25:28 AM AEST (User
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thiz iz gr8!!! i love it, keep it up! |
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Re: Broken Promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by TeRrahiel on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 03:39:16 PM AEST (User
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That is really great though I'm on the "other side" - I was let down a few days ago and you helped me see the thing on the other hand. |
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