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Array ( [sid] => 68006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ThE GirL With tHE MySterIous Eyes [time] => 2004-10-18 22:38:15 [hometext] => ShHhhH MySteriOus [bodytext] => I never understood the eyes of a broken heart
Standing there in the gloomy night
Pouring her teary eyes
Never took the chance and tried to understand
Gave her my shoulder and walked away

She sits there starring out her window
Crying talking about how she’s feeling neglected
Gave him her all
Never took the chance and looked at her
Now she’s lost and she doesn’t ask why
She gave him her heart
Took it and put it in the dark

Where does she go from here?
She cries for answers
That never seems to be answered
Penetrating for clues to her life
She needs to get back up and fight

He sits there watching TV
Does she exist is all that runs in her mind
Weeps and screams
Nothing but silence
Can she make it?
Will she survive?
Now I understand
The girl with the mysterious eyes

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ThE GirL With tHE MySterIous Eyes

Contributed by Butterfly_love on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:38:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I never understood the eyes of a broken heart
Standing there in the gloomy night
Pouring her teary eyes
Never took the chance and tried to understand
Gave her my shoulder and walked away

She sits there starring out her window
Crying talking about how she’s feeling neglected
Gave him her all
Never took the chance and looked at her
Now she’s lost and she doesn’t ask why
She gave him her heart
Took it and put it in the dark

Where does she go from here?
She cries for answers
That never seems to be answered
Penetrating for clues to her life
She needs to get back up and fight

He sits there watching TV
Does she exist is all that runs in her mind
Weeps and screams
Nothing but silence
Can she make it?
Will she survive?
Now I understand
The girl with the mysterious eyes

Copyright Â© Butterfly_love ... [ 2004-10-18 22:38:15]
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Re: ThE GirL With tHE MySterIous Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OnlyInDeathITrulyLive on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:42:01 PM AEST
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amazing poem, kinda hits close to home with someone I know. Really enjoyed it

Re: ThE GirL With tHE MySterIous Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Yousef on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:11:45 PM AEST
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Good poem, well written and well presented too, your style is interesting and I was so pulled to that girl with the mysterious eyes, Good job.

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