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Petals and Tears
Contributed by
CVoni
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:38:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hand in hand they walked through the garden.
He was in awe of a wilting rose.
He noticed that the petals fell hard and fast,
yet made no sound.
At the same time...
her tears began to fall,
as hard and fast,
and they were just as silent.
He walked on...trampeling the petals and tears;
obvlious to one, and in awe of the other.
It was then that she realized...
he could hear the silence of a dying rose;
but not the sound of her breaking heart.
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CVoni
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2004-10-18 19:38:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Petals and Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by chadbrown on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST (User
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Such vivid imagery, my heart was locked within a vice the entire time. Magnificent. |
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