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Array ( [sid] => 67948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mental health warning of a flawless beauty [time] => 2004-10-18 17:31:24 [hometext] => This is rather blunt and honest, it is about myself, dont think ive ever been so honest in a poem. i had a couple of friends help choose the name but i liked it thought it was perfect [bodytext] =>
Wandering in this world of lust,
My feelings may as well be dust.
Forever collecting yet never showing the underneath,
Leaving me as fragile as an autumn leaf.

Why should it be important to what I am thinking,
I think as constant as my heart keeps beating.
The vague look upon my face is my lonely inner child,
Apparently I have become wild.
Someone come tame me if you think me worthy.
You will have to follow me closely.

Prepare yourself to get seriously hurt,
And maybe even to flirt,
I will try not to hurt you, but I will,
It seems to be part of me deal.
I do not do it intentionally, it is just me.
So please do not get angry
oh please oh baby please

Am I worth all your effort when I am a lost cause?
My negativity is one of my biggest flaws,
Another flaw is my beauty,
It draws people in just to get hurt and angry.

I should come with a mental health warning,
It is likely to end with one of us bleeding.
It should not be you, but me



SJ [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 61 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Mental health warning of a flawless beauty

Contributed by little_genna on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:31:24 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles




Wandering in this world of lust,
My feelings may as well be dust.
Forever collecting yet never showing the underneath,
Leaving me as fragile as an autumn leaf.

Why should it be important to what I am thinking,
I think as constant as my heart keeps beating.
The vague look upon my face is my lonely inner child,
Apparently I have become wild.
Someone come tame me if you think me worthy.
You will have to follow me closely.

Prepare yourself to get seriously hurt,
And maybe even to flirt,
I will try not to hurt you, but I will,
It seems to be part of me deal.
I do not do it intentionally, it is just me.
So please do not get angry
oh please oh baby please

Am I worth all your effort when I am a lost cause?
My negativity is one of my biggest flaws,
Another flaw is my beauty,
It draws people in just to get hurt and angry.

I should come with a mental health warning,
It is likely to end with one of us bleeding.
It should not be you, but me



SJ




Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-10-18 17:31:24]
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Re: Mental health warning of a flawless beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by shadows on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:38:23 PM AEST
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Kind of tragic and sad, I like it, good write.




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