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Array ( [sid] => 67935 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cut off [time] => 2004-10-18 14:07:49 [hometext] => i wrote this while i let my then boyfriend decide the fate of our relationship and he ended it, im not even sure if this can be called poetry but i wanted to put all my thoughts down, so its not all together, but it expresses how i felt at the time [bodytext] => you are cutting me off
i cant breathe
cutting me out
cut off from your love
why stop your love?
how can you feel nothing
does all that we've been through mean nothing?
we had so many good times,
surely they'll return?
won't things return to how they were?
how come it was so good and now so bad
is it really over, did you mean what you said
or am i holding onto empty spaces?
all my dreams for the future shattered in a moment
cant you see im hurting?
even though i still love you i always will
when did you stop loving me?
is this really good bye
is this really the end?
did we come all this way for nothing
we've come such a long, long way,
but now we've gone to far
i spent a long time getting here
and even longer dreaming about it
everyday i would wake smiling of you
thankful that you were there
maybe i was nieve, maybe i just couldnt see
was it you or only me
who thought you would be there forever
always there to listen and laugh
now its my turn, im hear to listen
or are you too busy, is there anytime for me?
i can't believe its turned out this way
i would never have seen this, not in any of my dreams
don't let this be the end
we are so involved surely?
i am the one you love right?
or were you just lying?
we are stronger than this
are you going to let this be the end or not?
i dont even know if i know anymore
you decide, stranger
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cut off

Contributed by clotti on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



you are cutting me off
i cant breathe
cutting me out
cut off from your love
why stop your love?
how can you feel nothing
does all that we've been through mean nothing?
we had so many good times,
surely they'll return?
won't things return to how they were?
how come it was so good and now so bad
is it really over, did you mean what you said
or am i holding onto empty spaces?
all my dreams for the future shattered in a moment
cant you see im hurting?
even though i still love you i always will
when did you stop loving me?
is this really good bye
is this really the end?
did we come all this way for nothing
we've come such a long, long way,
but now we've gone to far
i spent a long time getting here
and even longer dreaming about it
everyday i would wake smiling of you
thankful that you were there
maybe i was nieve, maybe i just couldnt see
was it you or only me
who thought you would be there forever
always there to listen and laugh
now its my turn, im hear to listen
or are you too busy, is there anytime for me?
i can't believe its turned out this way
i would never have seen this, not in any of my dreams
don't let this be the end
we are so involved surely?
i am the one you love right?
or were you just lying?
we are stronger than this
are you going to let this be the end or not?
i dont even know if i know anymore
you decide, stranger




Copyright © clotti ... [ 2004-10-18 14:07:49]
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Re: cut off (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:48:04 PM AEST
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Though you may not consider this a poem it is still very good. It is good to get this type of emotion onto paper. I once asked my long term boyfriend his reasons for ending it, well it was our 'conversation' after we broke up. I didnt like the answers. You will move on in time just dont give yourself a hard time over it. enjoy your life and keep on writing it helps

take care
Gen xx


Re: cut off (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:13:49 PM AEST
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This is very good. I have been there myself and it hurts like h****. It helps to get it out in writing and when we do that, our emotions come out in full force and the result is bound to be quite powerful. Very nice.


Re: cut off (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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A feeling i can definitely relate with. Im sorry that you are going through this right now. Just know that it is no fault of your own that the relationship ended. With time, the pain will become less and less each day.
-Chanti




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