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Array ( [sid] => 67921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Magic Moment [time] => 2004-10-18 12:01:37 [hometext] => CCTV presents a flat screen picture on the kichen wall of the swimming pool conversion in the old barn. Grampa (me)sits nursing a cup of tea. Enter on the screen, our youngest grandaughter (aged nine and three quarters) in her swimming costume. [bodytext] => She glides gracefully into view
Spins on pointed toe
the others trace a perfect circle
round and round they go

Her arms stretched out elegantly
extending imaginary wings
gossamer thin and gleaming
fragile fairylike things

A water nymph bestowing
a curtsey or caress
on squirrels, frogs and butterflies
who expect nothing less

With skill beyond her years
she creats a sylvan glade
lakeside peace, tranquility
out of her dancing made.

Then suddenly becomes aware
that she is not alone.....
A pirouette, a tiny splash.....
my water nyph is gone
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 35 [informant] => Wrybod [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SpecialOccassion )

A Magic Moment

Contributed by Wrybod on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SpecialOccassion

She glides gracefully into view
Spins on pointed toe
the others trace a perfect circle
round and round they go

Her arms stretched out elegantly
extending imaginary wings
gossamer thin and gleaming
fragile fairylike things

A water nymph bestowing
a curtsey or caress
on squirrels, frogs and butterflies
who expect nothing less

With skill beyond her years
she creats a sylvan glade
lakeside peace, tranquility
out of her dancing made.

Then suddenly becomes aware
that she is not alone.....
A pirouette, a tiny splash.....
my water nyph is gone

Copyright © Wrybod ... [ 2004-10-18 12:01:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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Bob, this is lovely. I love to glimpse my grandsons when in their imagination. It is amazing to watch. Great write here.

Rita

Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:01:37 AM AEST
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A really lovely poem. I enjoyed this immensely

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:18:28 AM AEST
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Very beautifull. i can see her.
You've created a magic moment masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:52:31 AM AEST
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paint a pretty picture here
your words have blessed my open ear
yes, you are much a dear
beauty is very near

michele

Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:05:30 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful I really enjoyed it..xxx

Re: A Magic Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:23:34 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM

THANK YOU FOR SHARING

LOVED IT

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