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Array ( [sid] => 67866 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => October [time] => 2004-10-17 22:36:26 [hometext] => You cannot look for death, it will find you... [bodytext] => As the chill in the air begins to creep
into my heart it too seeps
I cry out for warmth on this bitter night
but I hear no answer to its delight
please someone hold me I am sacred
no one answers this simple prayer
As I wander deeper into the wood
it is getter colder as I pull up my hood
i thought i would find you on this night
but as I walk deeper all I find is fright
I tried to be brave and strong for you
but you let me down as you always do
so now I am lost, shaking, alone,
no one here to guide me to my home
only the whipping wind howling in my ears
and a fear that still resides in me after all these years
starting to run soon becoming out of breathe
and quickly following i fear is death
my body begging to collapse on the ground
but then, by what will i be found
so i push on through this cold October night
in my head I ponder if this way is right
and as I give up and alow myself to fall
i hear behind me something starting to crawl
it comes ever closer step by step
i try not to move hold my breathe
I feel the hairs standing up on my back
along with a feeling I can describe as only black
and as it brushes up right behind me
I know Its all over, FINALLY



[comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
October

Contributed by Rxqueen on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:36:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



As the chill in the air begins to creep
into my heart it too seeps
I cry out for warmth on this bitter night
but I hear no answer to its delight
please someone hold me I am sacred
no one answers this simple prayer
As I wander deeper into the wood
it is getter colder as I pull up my hood
i thought i would find you on this night
but as I walk deeper all I find is fright
I tried to be brave and strong for you
but you let me down as you always do
so now I am lost, shaking, alone,
no one here to guide me to my home
only the whipping wind howling in my ears
and a fear that still resides in me after all these years
starting to run soon becoming out of breathe
and quickly following i fear is death
my body begging to collapse on the ground
but then, by what will i be found
so i push on through this cold October night
in my head I ponder if this way is right
and as I give up and alow myself to fall
i hear behind me something starting to crawl
it comes ever closer step by step
i try not to move hold my breathe
I feel the hairs standing up on my back
along with a feeling I can describe as only black
and as it brushes up right behind me
I know Its all over, FINALLY







Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-10-17 22:36:26]
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Re: October (User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:50:01 PM AEST
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Great writing...and Rx Queen is a great song :)


Re: October (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:09:14 PM AEST
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This is brilliant, it flows perfectly and the ending couldnt be better. Excellent write, I love it. Very inspiring

Take Care
- Becca


Re: October (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:23:16 AM AEST
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awesome


Re: October (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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Hey Sweet one!!! Oh my gosh this is touching ... it is sad, but speaks the truth ... it pulled me in. Great job again! Keep writing strong.




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