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Array ( [sid] => 67802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Treyton [time] => 2004-10-17 14:23:19 [hometext] => This is for my beautiful angel, my loving son Treyton Seth. [bodytext] => His blue eye's so innocent, his soft smile so true.
It's a brighter tommorow just knowing he'll be there
when my day is through.
Waiting patiently for me to return to his side.
He runs to me with open arms, his feeling's he does not hide.
He greets me with a smile, a kiss.
I don't have to question, I know it does not get any better than this.
He lies beside me each night, sometimes he even sings.
There's no way to describe, how much joy to my life he brings.
He's the one true love that I will hold until my dying breath.
My darling angel, my beautiful baby boy,
My TREYTON SETH. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 23 [informant] => FiggySue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Treyton

Contributed by FiggySue on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:23:19 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

His blue eye's so innocent, his soft smile so true.
It's a brighter tommorow just knowing he'll be there
when my day is through.
Waiting patiently for me to return to his side.
He runs to me with open arms, his feeling's he does not hide.
He greets me with a smile, a kiss.
I don't have to question, I know it does not get any better than this.
He lies beside me each night, sometimes he even sings.
There's no way to describe, how much joy to my life he brings.
He's the one true love that I will hold until my dying breath.
My darling angel, my beautiful baby boy,
My TREYTON SETH.

Copyright © FiggySue ... [ 2004-10-17 14:23:19]
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Re: Treyton (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:06:22 PM AEST
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That was amazing. A child can bring joy to the sadest heart and increase the joy of the joyful. Great write.

Re: Treyton (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:11:43 PM AEST
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Awesome write for your son..... Love it... Treasure those times always...
Jenni

Re: Treyton (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:21:49 PM AEST
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That was beautiful...I know how you feel...My children are grown now,but that feeling always stays.I enjoyed your poem.:)

Re: Treyton (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:24:30 PM AEST
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Beautifuly done.You too are special to be so blessed.
Sinned

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