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that I've gone over the bend
it will be to late
it will already be the end
what kind of parent are you
to deny your drinking
and tell me it's not true
so now I have to stay with my father
yes thats the one
who beats his daughter
when will you come home
and where is the day
I won't be all alone
tears fall to the ground
as that father of mine
begins to pound
I keep telling myself I deserve it
when then again
he begins to hit
but I have no where else to go
cause my mom ran away
she drinks too much
and she's drunk everyday
my "family" won't take me in
the only one
he has beat me again
slower and slower
the blood seems to cover
over my dead, lifeless body
he hovers [comments] => 3 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Daddy

Contributed by screwup on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

when will you realize
that I've gone over the bend
it will be to late
it will already be the end
what kind of parent are you
to deny your drinking
and tell me it's not true
so now I have to stay with my father
yes thats the one
who beats his daughter
when will you come home
and where is the day
I won't be all alone
tears fall to the ground
as that father of mine
begins to pound
I keep telling myself I deserve it
when then again
he begins to hit
but I have no where else to go
cause my mom ran away
she drinks too much
and she's drunk everyday
my "family" won't take me in
the only one
he has beat me again
slower and slower
the blood seems to cover
over my dead, lifeless body
he hovers

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-10-17 14:15:33]
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Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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:( sad poem....but good. Hang in there, remember, no leaving!

Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:47:43 PM AEST
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Hope your writing helps you
deal with this stuff.

--Mothy

Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:21:28 AM AEST
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A small glimps, but a harsh life, your family has dished out, sad poem, with vivid details, understand why you wanna leave and try life on ya own.

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