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Array ( [sid] => 67763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You broke my heart [time] => 2004-10-17 04:08:55 [hometext] => This song was written in the old 60's doo wop style for those who are old enough to remember that. [bodytext] => Well- I-
I thought you were in love
but I guess that I was wrong
or else you would not have broken my heart

I trusted you
and you cheated me
guess we were not meant to be
or else you would not have broken my heart

I gave you love so true
did all you asked me to
and yet I find you now
kissing another guy
My whole world is destroyed
bitterness now employed
for what you have done to me

I'll never be
the same as before you
all that's left for me is tears
since the day you betrayed my heart-

I will never be the same
since the day that you broke my heart.

I wrote this song earlier this year. It is my 3rd try at that style of music. I used to listen to it alot growing up. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

You broke my heart

Contributed by Archie on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:08:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Well- I-
I thought you were in love
but I guess that I was wrong
or else you would not have broken my heart

I trusted you
and you cheated me
guess we were not meant to be
or else you would not have broken my heart

I gave you love so true
did all you asked me to
and yet I find you now
kissing another guy
My whole world is destroyed
bitterness now employed
for what you have done to me

I'll never be
the same as before you
all that's left for me is tears
since the day you betrayed my heart-

I will never be the same
since the day that you broke my heart.

I wrote this song earlier this year. It is my 3rd try at that style of music. I used to listen to it alot growing up.

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-10-17 04:08:55]
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Re: You broke my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:12:33 AM AEST
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Sad but very good write.
Aaaah Yeah, I rmember the 60's
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: You broke my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:43:45 AM AEST
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I really like this Arch....but damn...did ya have to go and make me feel so old?? lmao :o)

Well done as always
Barkeep!!

Larry

Re: You broke my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:42:13 AM AEST
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A beautiful song though sad, awesome rythem, and flowing lyrics, vivid feelings portrayed through out, cool to read.

Re: You broke my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:28:48 AM AEST
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Excellent Archie yes I remember the 60s feel old now (sings doo wop) great lyrics to this one

Love Sweetangelukxxxxx

Re: You broke my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:28:40 PM AEST
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who put the bop in bop shu bop...lol. I love that style...man those were the days...sha na na..the big bopper..guess how old I am??? no..no.don't...that was my sister...I listen to her music..rotflmao. Great song..she'll love it!!!

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