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your eyes so beautiful
the way you say hello my love
that tells me i am the only one

yet in the morning i have to wake
and realize your just a dream
you were only in my imagination
and you never were real

and then at night i go to bed
and our love begins again
the love i that i can never get
in reality

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only if you were real

Contributed by nogoodnamesleft on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

your touch so soft
your eyes so beautiful
the way you say hello my love
that tells me i am the only one

yet in the morning i have to wake
and realize your just a dream
you were only in my imagination
and you never were real

and then at night i go to bed
and our love begins again
the love i that i can never get
in reality

Copyright © nogoodnamesleft ... [ 2004-10-16 22:51:06]
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Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:08:46 PM AEST
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great write =]

Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:14:51 PM AEST
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Some love you can only get in dreams!! I enjoyed reading this. I hope to get to read more of your writing in the near future~

mckayla

Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by Buggsy on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:17:28 PM AEST
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Awesome poem! Nothing more to say.

Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:49:16 PM AEST
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simple and short and great. i really like this one, and i think i can only find my "true love" only in my dreams too because here on god's green earth she is yet to be found.

Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:21:36 AM AEST
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First off..... Welcome to YPDC! (I love your user-name - lol!)

This is a nice first post.... and hugely relatable. I have a few like this on my page as well. *sigh* If only....

Please keep posting...
SNM

Re: only if you were real (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:19:00 AM AEST
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This is one cute poem, thanks for sharing.

Jane

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