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What to think of you
I have no explanation
Call it an infatuation
I don’t know why
I even bother to try
I know how it’ll end
With a broken heart to mend
But I still keep trying
And continue buying
Your stupid lines
Ignoring all the signs
Of an obvious reality
Leading to fatality
An act of stupidity
Ending with humility
And another love missed
Another person added to my list
Of those who've hurt me
Those who couldn’t see
How simple words that can
Supposedly make a man
Can also damage a person so much
That they withdraw from human touch
"I love you"
Eight simple letters not ringing true
Causing a horrid heart break
And a soul struggling to escape
One too many mistakes
And a life she just couldn’t take... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cuddlytiger17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Leading To Fatality

Contributed by cuddlytiger17 on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I have no clue
What to think of you
I have no explanation
Call it an infatuation
I don’t know why
I even bother to try
I know how it’ll end
With a broken heart to mend
But I still keep trying
And continue buying
Your stupid lines
Ignoring all the signs
Of an obvious reality
Leading to fatality
An act of stupidity
Ending with humility
And another love missed
Another person added to my list
Of those who've hurt me
Those who couldn’t see
How simple words that can
Supposedly make a man
Can also damage a person so much
That they withdraw from human touch
"I love you"
Eight simple letters not ringing true
Causing a horrid heart break
And a soul struggling to escape
One too many mistakes
And a life she just couldn’t take...

Copyright Â© cuddlytiger17 ... [ 2004-10-16 18:54:20]
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Re: Leading To Fatality (User Rating: 1 )
by alyssakoren_03 on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:55:17 PM AEST
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wow i have felt like that so many times beofr eit's sacry just hang in there there's someone out there for you

Re: Leading To Fatality (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:00:27 PM AEST
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excellent write. kind of rappish =]

Re: Leading To Fatality (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:35:27 AM AEST
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Great write! I think this rings true for pretty much anyone, you did a great job describing your anguish and I hope to hear more from you!

Re: Leading To Fatality (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:33:34 PM AEST
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I love this! it is very good... as I'm going thru much of the same... good job
~screwup

Re: Leading To Fatality (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:16:54 PM AEST
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hmmm, i just hope this isn't about me!!! anyway great poem, you always know how to express the emotions of pain and struggling so well,. keep doin' yo thang A!!! lol

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