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Array ( [sid] => 6771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Split [time] => 2002-11-16 00:00:00 [hometext] => This is about a person who has been let down and feels no urge to live on... [bodytext] => Personality split like the yin and the yang,
evil balanced to keep out the pain.
Eyes kept shut to stay in the black,
night is the way to keep us on track.
The light blinds us, the force of the right,
pushing life down until we see night.
Life wasn't like this before the mistake,
but there's only so much a person can take.
Its come to the point I no longer fear death,
as I feel and smell the grim reaper's breath.
Coming to the end of a miserable trek,
I wait for life's waitress to hand me the check. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 13 [informant] => senorwoohoo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Split

Contributed by senorwoohoo on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Personality split like the yin and the yang,
evil balanced to keep out the pain.
Eyes kept shut to stay in the black,
night is the way to keep us on track.
The light blinds us, the force of the right,
pushing life down until we see night.
Life wasn't like this before the mistake,
but there's only so much a person can take.
Its come to the point I no longer fear death,
as I feel and smell the grim reaper's breath.
Coming to the end of a miserable trek,
I wait for life's waitress to hand me the check.

Copyright © senorwoohoo ... [ 2002-11-16 00:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:14:12 AM AEST
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very somber and well written, get your friend some help,

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:18:37 AM AEST
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This had so much feeling in this,how sad to feel this! Your friend is luckt to have you! Christina

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:14:27 AM AEST
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pretty goooodA! hug a moose!

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:14:28 AM AEST
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pretty goooodA! hug a moose!

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by alternachik29 on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:38:03 AM AEST
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It's beautiful! It touched me and opened me to pity the person to the point that I wanted to reach out and console them. Keep 'em comin'!!!
-alternahcik29

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:59:06 PM AEST
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good poem
it is always
good to help
out your freinds
in need . :*)

Re: Split (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 08:35:05 PM AEST
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Dearest Senorwoohoo @-<-<<-
Dark and lovely, my favorite kind of write these days.. well done:)
Always your friend Nessa

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