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Useless desire of love and belonging,
Wanting someone with such a passion of longing,
To describe such happiness and pain,
My reality is beginning to twist and go insane.
To obtain your love would be bliss,
Yet bliss is not always the taste of happiness.
The touch of your skin or even the feel of your lips when we kiss,
That is when I'm in complete bliss,
Do you notice our lack of contact makes me distant and sad.
Have I done something bad?
Maybe I'm just being a foolish little girl and you never liked me,
Just played me like all the rest, well thats just what happens to me,
Yes you have issues with an old friend or should I say flame,
Our friendship relationship just seems to have become lame.
Do I make you feel sick? You do not seem to want to touch me,
So I feel blind, show me
Just say the truth be honest don't string me along,
If you do you may as well sing the same old song.

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Sing the same old song

Contributed by little_genna on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:03:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Useless desire of love and belonging,
Wanting someone with such a passion of longing,
To describe such happiness and pain,
My reality is beginning to twist and go insane.
To obtain your love would be bliss,
Yet bliss is not always the taste of happiness.
The touch of your skin or even the feel of your lips when we kiss,
That is when I'm in complete bliss,
Do you notice our lack of contact makes me distant and sad.
Have I done something bad?
Maybe I'm just being a foolish little girl and you never liked me,
Just played me like all the rest, well thats just what happens to me,
Yes you have issues with an old friend or should I say flame,
Our friendship relationship just seems to have become lame.
Do I make you feel sick? You do not seem to want to touch me,
So I feel blind, show me
Just say the truth be honest don't string me along,
If you do you may as well sing the same old song.

SJ

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-10-16 16:03:31]
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Re: Sing the same old song (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:31:34 PM AEST
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::tears:: i can definitly identify with u there...there was this kid red...well u dont need the whole story, it feel like u look right through me.
*athena

Re: Sing the same old song (User Rating: 1 )
by blueeyedevil13 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:07:00 PM AEST
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this is the way i feel alot, im always lonely and noone seems to love me and when they do they are distant and make me doubt their love. this is excellent.
keep writing
av

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