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Fairytale

Contributed by xemptydecemberx on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:33:29 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Your shallow heart painted in barbed wire
Awaiting it's next victim who shall it hire?
Love awaits but malice it recieves
Absent of feelings as her insides bleed
Pulling her into the emptyness you hold
Into your frostbitten heart so vacant and cold
Longing desperately for a little empathy
Insearch of your love, not your sympathy
As if this crushing memory isn't enough
Twisted memories of you nothing but tough
This deformed game you play with her heart
Where does it end, when did it start?
The scars inside tell a tale,
Of her struggle to love you, not to fail.
But this fairytale has no laughter,
And its never going to end with "Happily Ever After."




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Re: Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:50:16 PM AEST
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I really like this one, its sad, powerful and to the point. It flows perfectly and the lines:

'But this fairytale has no laughter,
And its never going to end with "Happily Ever After."
'

ended it beautifully. Fantastic write

Take Care
- Becca


Re: Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:32:14 AM AEST
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brilliant write. a true masterpiece. excellent rhyme and rhythym. you presented this perfectly =]


Re: Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:21:05 PM AEST
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Jacque,
it seems all of your poems kinda leave me speechless... so all I can say is beautiful write...
and take care
Deanna




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