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Array ( [sid] => 6759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Venting OUT! [time] => 2002-11-15 20:00:00 [hometext] => I didnt really write this one down it just all came out in a second as I went along!Written for my family,who doesnt know how I feel!
Comments welcomed! [bodytext] => You say you love me,but I cant tell,
Than why cant you just give me a yell,
I'm sick of you all,talking behind my back,
Believe me I know,thats a fact,
I loved our mother,more than you know,
So why does everyone,hate me so?
Because I live in her house,takeing care of dad?
Well if thats the case it's pretty sad,
I never asked for this house,& all in it,
I was there for them dont forget,
If you have something to say,than let it out,
I want to hear it to my face,no doubt,
but you still talk & I find out anyway,
How you feel about me to this day,
I'm not trying to take over,as you might think,
you can have it all,even the sink!
I have moms memory in my heart,
No one can take away that part!
There is a reason I got all of this,
Is there something you all try to miss?
I took care of mom,till her dying day,
Now I'm takeing care of dad,thats why I stay,
He asked me here because I care,
Where are you, Surely not here,
No one comes around but yet you complain,
Now who do you thinks going insane?
I love you all your my family,
But give me a break,and let me be!
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Venting OUT!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You say you love me,but I cant tell,
Than why cant you just give me a yell,
I'm sick of you all,talking behind my back,
Believe me I know,thats a fact,
I loved our mother,more than you know,
So why does everyone,hate me so?
Because I live in her house,takeing care of dad?
Well if thats the case it's pretty sad,
I never asked for this house,& all in it,
I was there for them dont forget,
If you have something to say,than let it out,
I want to hear it to my face,no doubt,
but you still talk & I find out anyway,
How you feel about me to this day,
I'm not trying to take over,as you might think,
you can have it all,even the sink!
I have moms memory in my heart,
No one can take away that part!
There is a reason I got all of this,
Is there something you all try to miss?
I took care of mom,till her dying day,
Now I'm takeing care of dad,thats why I stay,
He asked me here because I care,
Where are you, Surely not here,
No one comes around but yet you complain,
Now who do you thinks going insane?
I love you all your my family,
But give me a break,and let me be!

Copyright Â© LOWMAN613 ... [ 2002-11-15 20:00:00]
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Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 08:06:53 PM AEST
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I can identify with this, Christina.... well done!! Hope they see the good that you're doing..and that it's not for selfish reasons..
Jenni

Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:17:13 PM AEST
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Wow christina you know i couldn't
even imagine my family acting in this
manner if somthing happened to
someone i was so close to in my
family like this, but your strength and
love for your dad and mother shines
through in your words, you keep
that strength and dont let what
they say get in the way of you doing
what you feel is right, you know in
your heart what your doing is right
and you were asked to be there.
You have a huge heart, that's clear
from the way you write in most of your
poetry, I really enjoyed this one christina
it definately gives one alot to think about
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:18:08 PM AEST
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So sad that people are like this - and there are so many families the same. Great poem on a painful subject - hope they get the message!

Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:22:50 PM AEST
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Oh Christina, how very sad, I know it must hurt you inside, your doing the right thing, one day they will see,

Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:08:51 PM AEST
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You'd think losing your Mum would want them to be closer. Maybe they suffer guilt because you are the caring one. I hope they pull their heads out and treat you better.

Re: Venting OUT! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:40:49 PM AEST
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Thanx everyone for your suport on this subject it's a very toucy situation! My father gave everyone something I ended up with the house,for taking care of him for the rest of his life! Which everyone thinks is ok so they say,its what I hear behind closed doors is what makes me mad! They act like I dont know,but I do!They think I took over my parents home,redecorateing etc.I have to feel a part of me here! Thanx to all! Christina

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