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Array ( [sid] => 6758 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Him [time] => 2002-11-15 19:40:00 [hometext] => Written about that guy who got me through a really bad time in my life. [bodytext] => He was almost five foot nine
His big brown eyes looking down at mine
I couldn't bear to look at him
For I knew I couldn't hide my tears
I knew what he wanted to say
When he called me over
I could tell by his eyes
That he didn't want me anymore
I thought I would die
But life just went on
And I found someone new who cared for me...
Someone who knew what I needed
And that someone was you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 25 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Him

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



He was almost five foot nine
His big brown eyes looking down at mine
I couldn't bear to look at him
For I knew I couldn't hide my tears
I knew what he wanted to say
When he called me over
I could tell by his eyes
That he didn't want me anymore
I thought I would die
But life just went on
And I found someone new who cared for me...
Someone who knew what I needed
And that someone was you.




Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-15 19:40:00]
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Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetolbaby on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 02:04:31 AM AEST
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ShadowClouds you have no idea how much I can relate to this poem. This poem pretty much explained what i went through with my ex. Another, good write!


Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:34:49 AM AEST
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Some people just don't know how lucky they are Candice,
I'm glad you get through these times, it shows you are really a strong person indeed!
And we all need a little help sometimes.

You've written very well about a very difficult point in your life. Good one!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:40:32 AM AEST
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Dean, There are a lot of people that say I am a strong person. But when I look back over my life I see myself as weak. I have tried to see it as others do but I just can't I guess that is something else I need to work on. I am glad you like this one.
ShadowsCloud


Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:59:08 AM AEST
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Well all I can say Candice, from what I read of you, is that I think you are a good, strong person. But you're right that's something that only you can work on, I think! I mean I can't see how others can help with these things. Even though there are people whom quite happily make a good living at thinking they're doing so! I only know what I feel about you, from what you've told me.
I could get very confusing here!! So I'll stop with this I think!!Hehehe

With love
Dean;-)


Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:18:26 AM AEST
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Dean, any body could end up getting confusing on a subject like this. But I am glad that you thing I am a strong person by what you know about me.
ShadowsCloud




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