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Why do I have to be this way?
Why cant I be perfect?
Be like everone else..
with the percet grades..and perfect hair
It seems this pain will never go away
I try to tell people..
but they dont listen..
My life is like a record
keeps going round and round..

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Whey Me Lord?

Contributed by Britty on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:40:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Why me Lord?
Why do I have to be this way?
Why cant I be perfect?
Be like everone else..
with the percet grades..and perfect hair
It seems this pain will never go away
I try to tell people..
but they dont listen..
My life is like a record
keeps going round and round..

Copyright © Britty ... [ 2004-10-15 14:40:18]
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Re: Whey Me Lord? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:30:56 PM AEST
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My friend.. the grass always looks greener on the other side.
no body is perfect!!!!!

Good poem

Re: Whey Me Lord? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:52:28 PM AEST
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Please dont worry about being perfect because perfection doesnt live in this world. All those girls with the perfect hair, grades, etc ALL feel they have their own problems and imperfections. Deep down they feel just like you hun. Im sure you have a lot of wonderful attributes about the special person that is you.
Hugs
~Lovingangel4u~

Re: Whey Me Lord? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:03:41 PM AEST
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Oh how often these thoughts swim around my head. People say that no body is perfect and whilst that may be true, everyone is perfect to someone. For as we look at the girl across from us and see that she is exactly what we wish we could be, she'll be looking at someone else and thinking the exact same thing. Its all just a never-ending cycle that could quite easily make one go insane.

This is a brilliant write and I do understand how you feel. I could say learn to love who you are but well do I know that that isnt easy. I gave in trying. If you want to talk, I'm here so feel free to Pm me

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- Becca

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