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[aid] => mick
[title] => Dissappointment
[time] => 2004-10-15 11:23:06
[hometext] => This is a follow-up to Adoration, it's what happens when you spend too much time with your head in the clouds and then reality hits you... I liked Adoration better. The last line is iffy.
[bodytext] => Dissappointment You're not who I thought you were Not innocent, or angelic Not like me And it hurts that you're not perfect For a while it seemed obvious That you should be with me I know my expectations were impossibly high But your act made them so, and Now I feel cheated Shattered below you and wondering Why you wore the mask of deceit Was it insecurity? Peeling it off terrified me As if you were ugly underneath I felt something break I know I can't glue it back But I know I haven't really Lost anything at all You were always like this, covering up And I didn't see it How was I to know? I guess the lesson in this is Not to be so shallow I let you in too quickly Just because you were beautiful You didn't have to prove yourself By now I should know better Now I do know better. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 39 [informant] => ladyaryssa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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