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Array ( [sid] => 67533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In the end you'll save me [time] => 2004-10-15 10:41:49 [hometext] => i dont think many people will get this poem...well, the end anyways [bodytext] => I know its sad
But you know its true
I can't hide it
I'd do anything for you

Cupids hit me with his arrow
And now Im a slave to love
As Im a slave to the heavens
Your an angel from above

Theres so much I know
But so much more learn
Because I am not yet through with love
So for now I'll have to burn

Why is it like this?
From far away love looks like a glorious gift
But once you have it
You wish the burden would lift

This bliss we once experienced
Our love, no where near discreet
Is now being suffocated, drowned
No longer a preserving sweet

Softly kiss my head
And wish me goodnight
And I will sleep in peace
Until I see your light [comments] => 3 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kitty_cat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

In the end you'll save me

Contributed by Kitty_cat on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I know its sad
But you know its true
I can't hide it
I'd do anything for you

Cupids hit me with his arrow
And now Im a slave to love
As Im a slave to the heavens
Your an angel from above

Theres so much I know
But so much more learn
Because I am not yet through with love
So for now I'll have to burn

Why is it like this?
From far away love looks like a glorious gift
But once you have it
You wish the burden would lift

This bliss we once experienced
Our love, no where near discreet
Is now being suffocated, drowned
No longer a preserving sweet

Softly kiss my head
And wish me goodnight
And I will sleep in peace
Until I see your light

Copyright © Kitty_cat ... [ 2004-10-15 10:41:49]
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Re: In the end you'll save me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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a lovely write, but sad also,
pixie xx

Re: In the end you'll save me (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:18:37 PM AEST
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This is a really sweet poem. The end of it kind of completely stopped it in its tracks in this really sudden way, it worked really well.

Re: In the end you'll save me (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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"Why is it like this?
From far away love looks like a glorious gift
But once you have it
You wish the burden would lift"

I know those lines all to well...it seems to definetly scare you and soffocate you...your whole life has to change...great job bro!

please comment on my work too
summer

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