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Array ( [sid] => 6752 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Down Our Street [time] => 2002-11-15 17:40:00 [hometext] => The following words were composed during 1996 following a traumatic experience. They have recently been put to music.

In Loving Memory of my son Baby Joseph Weight...18.02.1996 [bodytext] => Slum streets and dirty places,
The children play outside with dirty faces,
An old man whistlin' a catchy tune,
Rolling up a cigarette in his room,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
Never again will it be the same.

A couple kissing with such passion,
Both dressed up in the height of fashion,
In the flat above there's a babies cry,
Someone's singing him a lullabye,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
But never again will it be the same.

The little girl takes her brother's hand,
Never will they understand,
Hopes and dreams come crashing down,
Anger and despair all around the town,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
Never again will it be the same.

Different cultures, two classes, sorrow no joy,
A young mother, having another baby boy,
Desperation and agony ended in death on that day,
Promises of a better future all blown away,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
And never again will it be the same.
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 39 [informant] => septic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Down Our Street

Contributed by septic on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Slum streets and dirty places,
The children play outside with dirty faces,
An old man whistlin' a catchy tune,
Rolling up a cigarette in his room,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
Never again will it be the same.

A couple kissing with such passion,
Both dressed up in the height of fashion,
In the flat above there's a babies cry,
Someone's singing him a lullabye,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
But never again will it be the same.

The little girl takes her brother's hand,
Never will they understand,
Hopes and dreams come crashing down,
Anger and despair all around the town,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
Never again will it be the same.

Different cultures, two classes, sorrow no joy,
A young mother, having another baby boy,
Desperation and agony ended in death on that day,
Promises of a better future all blown away,
Down our street there was grief and pain,
And never again will it be the same.




Copyright © septic ... [ 2002-11-15 17:40:00]
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Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:44:18 PM AEST
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This is so sad, my heart goes
out to you, Thanks for sharing this
one, it's so heartfelt and touching
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by Eastway on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:01:06 PM AEST
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I know the street concerned and there's now a great deal more good cheer there. The poet has composed some beautiful words and she herself is the most beautiful person I know.


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:07:55 PM AEST
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Awesome poem ... great write. I'm so sorry for your loss.


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:08:06 PM AEST
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A lot of feeling in to this how sad for you to go through! Good words! Loved this,Christina


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by thousandfold on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:40:20 PM AEST
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what a beautifully sad poem, so well written. i am so sorry for your loss.

*jenn


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 10:55:09 AM AEST
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Septic, Now that's what I call poetry. It rhymes, it scans and that makes it memorable. It has punch and honesty.
Great stuff


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:28:49 PM AEST
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Apologies I posted before I added my condolences


Re: Down Our Street (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST
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Apologies I posted before I added my condolences




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