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Array ( [sid] => 67497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye [time] => 2004-10-15 00:34:24 [hometext] => This poem is written for Deanna... I love you... babe... and also for all those out there who may be reading and contemplating suicide... DON'T LET IT BE YOUR LAST GOODBYE... comments welcomed... [bodytext] => I know... that I'm just a voice on a telephone line
Just a distant whisper floating upon the winds of your life
That echoes in your ear almost every night
I know... that you feel as though
You are being held prisoner in this life
Living behind those four chaotic walls
All so bare like the life involved
Bound and chained with all the pain
You bear every day and night

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

I know... I sound selfish...
After all... it's your life...
Even though... we've never met... face to face
I find... there are feelings deep down inside... I just can't erase
They're not lies... I have nothing to hide
They have been placed there... for a reason...
For me to share
With all those I care about and love

So... why do I love you so much?
I don't know...
Why does anyone love anyone?
God has brought us together...
Now... Satan is tearing us apart...
Ripping at the very seams of our hearts
We can't let that happen...
No... we can't...
So don't let this be... our last goodbye...

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

I've got so much more love to give...
'Cause there is so much more that needs to be said
You deserve much better than you've already lived
A life with a loving family and lots of loving friends

Babe... you can make that happen...
If you so choose...
If you want to make a real change in your life
Start with the face in the mirror tonight

Make a change that counts for something...
You have the power to choose...
Which way will it be... win or lose?
To WIN means LIFE...
To LOSE means you DIE...
To WIN means those who have tormented you all your life LOSE
To LOSE means you've given up... given in and made them the WINNERS... already... my friend

So... DON'T GIVE UP!
DON'T GIVE IN!
DON'T GIVE THEM THE SATISFACTION OF A WIN!

You must fight to survive...
You must go on with your journey through life
You have so much more to give...
So much more to live
If you choose life...
There's so much more you can offer...
If you'll just reach deep down inside...
And find that tiny bit of life...
A scrap that you tucked beneath...
Some forgotten piece of happiness that once existed

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

Don't let this be... the last poem I ever write
These words haven't come easily for me
Don't let these be the last words that pass between us
For one day... I want the chance to say...
"I love you..." to your face...
And give you a hug... that you've been waiting for... for so long...

Love... don't let this be... our last goodbye...





[comments] => 5 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 36 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
(Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I know... that I'm just a voice on a telephone line
Just a distant whisper floating upon the winds of your life
That echoes in your ear almost every night
I know... that you feel as though
You are being held prisoner in this life
Living behind those four chaotic walls
All so bare like the life involved
Bound and chained with all the pain
You bear every day and night

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

I know... I sound selfish...
After all... it's your life...
Even though... we've never met... face to face
I find... there are feelings deep down inside... I just can't erase
They're not lies... I have nothing to hide
They have been placed there... for a reason...
For me to share
With all those I care about and love

So... why do I love you so much?
I don't know...
Why does anyone love anyone?
God has brought us together...
Now... Satan is tearing us apart...
Ripping at the very seams of our hearts
We can't let that happen...
No... we can't...
So don't let this be... our last goodbye...

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

I've got so much more love to give...
'Cause there is so much more that needs to be said
You deserve much better than you've already lived
A life with a loving family and lots of loving friends

Babe... you can make that happen...
If you so choose...
If you want to make a real change in your life
Start with the face in the mirror tonight

Make a change that counts for something...
You have the power to choose...
Which way will it be... win or lose?
To WIN means LIFE...
To LOSE means you DIE...
To WIN means those who have tormented you all your life LOSE
To LOSE means you've given up... given in and made them the WINNERS... already... my friend

So... DON'T GIVE UP!
DON'T GIVE IN!
DON'T GIVE THEM THE SATISFACTION OF A WIN!

You must fight to survive...
You must go on with your journey through life
You have so much more to give...
So much more to live
If you choose life...
There's so much more you can offer...
If you'll just reach deep down inside...
And find that tiny bit of life...
A scrap that you tucked beneath...
Some forgotten piece of happiness that once existed

'Cause whatever you do... my friend...
I just want you to know...
I love you so
So much more than you ever could possibly know
Don't let this be... the end of our time
Don't let this be... our last goodbye

Don't let this be... the last poem I ever write
These words haven't come easily for me
Don't let these be the last words that pass between us
For one day... I want the chance to say...
"I love you..." to your face...
And give you a hug... that you've been waiting for... for so long...

Love... don't let this be... our last goodbye...









Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-10-15 00:34:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:46:43 AM AEST
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This is very good. I hope she didn't do it. I think it's not worth killing yourself even if you have a reason you should face it


Re: (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:01:09 AM AEST
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Another masterpeice of luv, understanding, compassion and openess. to others pain.
Proud of ya, girl.
luv, hugs,
yo momma,
emy


Re: (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:16:09 AM AEST
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hey love,
I'm gonna cry... wait, I am... thank you so much foe the poem... it was soooooo good, and it really touched my heart. I kinda feel like you stopped my heart from bleeding... we'll obviously you've stopped me from dying and your doing a damn good job my dear... without you I would have gone insane last night, and the many nights I struggle with myself... ok which is every night, but yeah... thank you sooo much babe... word cannot express what you mean to me.
I love you with everything that I have left... everything I have to give in this life goes to you because you are my only family... just NEVER forget that all my happiness was all in you...
I love you
~Deanna


Re: (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:14:20 AM AEST
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awww your love for Deanna really shows in this write, I hope that you can finally get through to jher and show her that life IS worth living,

takecare

pixie xx


Re: (Don't Let This Be) Our last Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:19:26 PM AEST
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lots of emotion, love the poem, thanks for the comments.




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