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Array ( [sid] => 67495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friendship [time] => 2004-10-14 23:37:21 [hometext] => A lot of my friends are having problems right now... and this is how it feels.. PLEASE GIVE COMMENTS!! [bodytext] => The days are warm,
Laughter, Sun.
But that's only when
our friendship has begun

The nights grow colder,
the secrets let out,
And all I do is worry,
and worry about.

What can I do
to help you along?
Write you a poem,
or sing you a song?

Tell you I love you,
That I'm always there?
Or does it just help,
that I actually care?

Please don't have problems,
bring back the light,
We'll wake up to a new day,
After we say goodnight. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 32 [informant] => humboldthunny17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Friendship

Contributed by humboldthunny17 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The days are warm,
Laughter, Sun.
But that's only when
our friendship has begun

The nights grow colder,
the secrets let out,
And all I do is worry,
and worry about.

What can I do
to help you along?
Write you a poem,
or sing you a song?

Tell you I love you,
That I'm always there?
Or does it just help,
that I actually care?

Please don't have problems,
bring back the light,
We'll wake up to a new day,
After we say goodnight.

Copyright © humboldthunny17 ... [ 2004-10-14 23:37:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:22:44 AM AEST
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Awww, that was really sweet. Your friends are lucky to have someone who cares as much as you do.

Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:42:51 AM AEST
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Beautifully written... almost sounds like something I'd write... I... too... have a lot of friends with problems right now...
What can you do? Listen? Pray? Be there for them? Love tem? Even from afar?
Great poem... thanks for sharing!
~Donna~

Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:33:03 AM AEST
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great poem
you seem a great friend to have...
I bet they appreciate you!
cheers!~

Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by SkaterGirl16 on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 10:54:41 AM AEST
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This is EXACTLY what it is like for me when my friends are going through tough times. I feel terrible for them and I can't think of ways to make the pain stop. I think all you can really do is let them know that you are there for them if they need to talk.

Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:31:08 AM AEST
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You seem like a great friend to have. Great write.

Spazzo

Re: Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:01:57 PM AEST
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Cebre i love you!!! thank you for helping me with my problems. i cant wait till you get back from Disney Land

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