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Answers I need to find
A reason without fault
To unlock this forbidden vault
Full of fears and pain galore
So helpless wanting nothing more
Hiding within the depths of unhappiness
Fully knowing the risks of this
But unable to break away
So scared that I must stay
Petrified to transform
But sick of being so forlorn
Torn between both worlds I live
But unwilling to give in
I walk the ropes of sanity
Lacking any potential vanity
Engulfed in terror here I stand
Longing for a helping hand
But incapable of such a request
Losing myself in this vast mess
Hanging on by one last thread
Dreams exploding in my head
Thoughts combining into one
This night is nearly done
But one last thing I do inquire
As the night feasts upon my desire
I ask that no one show me any pity
And that my life be left to serendipity... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 61 [informant] => cuddlytiger17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Serendipity

Contributed by cuddlytiger17 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:26:54 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Thoughts rushing through my mind
Answers I need to find
A reason without fault
To unlock this forbidden vault
Full of fears and pain galore
So helpless wanting nothing more
Hiding within the depths of unhappiness
Fully knowing the risks of this
But unable to break away
So scared that I must stay
Petrified to transform
But sick of being so forlorn
Torn between both worlds I live
But unwilling to give in
I walk the ropes of sanity
Lacking any potential vanity
Engulfed in terror here I stand
Longing for a helping hand
But incapable of such a request
Losing myself in this vast mess
Hanging on by one last thread
Dreams exploding in my head
Thoughts combining into one
This night is nearly done
But one last thing I do inquire
As the night feasts upon my desire
I ask that no one show me any pity
And that my life be left to serendipity...

Copyright © cuddlytiger17 ... [ 2004-10-14 17:26:54]
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Re: Serendipity (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:37:34 PM AEST
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Ah! Serendipity! Fate! You're speaking my language!

I can absolutely relate to this piece. Oh, I know - everyone will probably say that, but I really feel that I undertand it. You've done a good job in putting it into words... I'm not so sure I've ever been able to do so myself.

And, of course... Welcome to YPDC! I hope you stick around for a while!
SNM

Re: Serendipity (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:52:39 PM AEST
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thx for the comment :).....i love the title of this poem i always that that word was so me..i base my life on that....i absolutely imbibe the words you use in this poem..there very well used..

blessed be
sirena

Re: Serendipity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:25:45 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. I especially liked the last two lines...
I ask that no one show me any pity
And that my life be left to serendipity...

The title piqued my interest and I'm glad. This was more than worth the read.

~Breezy

Re: Serendipity (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:04:59 PM AEST
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don't consider it pity, consider it care. you know i love you ct, your poetry is great, depressing but great.lol, anyway keep it up, i love your stuff

Re: Serendipity (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:17:58 PM AEST
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Another great poem,
a worthwhile read!

--Mothy

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