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Life, what a farce that has become.
Slowly turning, mind undone.
Wishful end, drawing near.
Thoughts of words, so unclear.

Star filled night, shines so bright.
Through the tunnel, I see the light.
I'm at the end, I've reached my goal.
Although my actions, I can't control.

My soul now shakes, my body's dead.
Up high I rise, but feel like lead.
Hell, it seems, the place for me.
Not content, to let me be.

Anne (Necromant) seemed to like this a lot when I showed her so I guess I can dedicate it to her. =)
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Farce

Contributed by Empty_Soul on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:50:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

was very uninspired and just couldn't write, hense the absence. i'm hoping this is the first of many in my "comeback" =)

Life, what a farce that has become.
Slowly turning, mind undone.
Wishful end, drawing near.
Thoughts of words, so unclear.

Star filled night, shines so bright.
Through the tunnel, I see the light.
I'm at the end, I've reached my goal.
Although my actions, I can't control.

My soul now shakes, my body's dead.
Up high I rise, but feel like lead.
Hell, it seems, the place for me.
Not content, to let me be.

Anne (Necromant) seemed to like this a lot when I showed her so I guess I can dedicate it to her. =)

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Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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Welcome back Empty_Soul... ! You were gone before I showed up... but, I'm sure we'll be crossing paths now that you've found your way home.

I enjoyed your comeback post... please do stick around and keep writing. I didn't write for years and it just about killed me. NOW - you can't stop me! lol! I hope it's the same for you.... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Always delighted to meet a new poet,
SNM

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:04:42 PM AEST
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Yes let us hope that this is your first of many more to come young man lol

Enjoyable write, excellent rhyme scheme and i love the flow ;)

Worded perfectly as yours most usually are

Attacked with a giant hammer

Luke

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:17:00 PM AEST
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came back strong...good.

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:21:08 PM AEST
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great comeback..awesome write!!!

blessed be
sirena

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:33:04 PM AEST
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Welcome back, Empty Soul..... Good write..
Jenni

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:17:11 AM AEST
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love it!

Re: Farce (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:08:55 AM AEST
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Awwww!!!!!!!! You're so sweet! Ohhh so you found a title for it. It fits! The more I read it the more I want to re-read it and soo true! Keep it up!

p.s. I didn't like this.... I love it madly! :)

Anne :)

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