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Array ( [sid] => 67410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2004-10-14 12:40:03 [hometext] => I wrote this for the love of my life. [bodytext] => I was hungry; You gave me nourishment...
I was thirsty; You quenched it...
I was unloved; You cherished me...
I was friendless; You gave me companionship...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was ungrateful; From you I learned gratitude...
I was living in darkness; You brought me the light...
I was hateful; From you I learned about love...
I was mean; From you I learned about kindness...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was angry; You taught me to laugh...
I cried a tear; You dried it...
I thought I was ugly; You showed me what true beauty is...
I was sexless; You made love to me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was feeling ignored; You gave me attention...
I was sad; You brought me so much happiness...
I was tough; You gave me such tenderness...
I was hard hearted; You softened my soul...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was damn right rude; You taught me manners...
I was with out humor; From you I learned to joke...
I was blind to others feelings; From you I learned insight...
I was alone; You became my friend;
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

Inside I was sickened; From you I received healing...
My mind was a baffling mess; From you I learned to see my-
self as a genius...
I was unpolished; From you I learned eloquence...
I was a stammering idiot; From you I learned such grace...
I was lost; You found the real me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I had such bizarre ideas; You brought me down to earth...
I was sailing alone; You became my captain...
I was living in hell; You brought heaven to me...
I was misjudged; You didn't judge me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was distrusting; You taught me the meaning of true justice...
I was in despair; you gave me hope...
I was in anguish; you brought me glee...
I was shallow; You me depth...
I was without sight; you gave me vision...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank you... My lover... My Friend...

I was death to others feelings; You leant me your ears...
I was feeling low; You brought me to new heights...
I was without feeling; You taught me passion...
I was cold; You gave me warmth...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend....

My life was without meaning; You gave me a reason to live...
I was fragile; You gave me strength...
I thought I wanted for nothing; You gave me a desire for
all of life...
I was egotistical; You humbled me...
I was with out trust; You taught me to have faith...
I was so little without you;
I've became so much with you...
Thank you... My Lover... My friend...

I was crazy; You restored me to sanity...
I was crying; You brought me comfort...
My heart was broken; You put it on the mend...
The fire in my soul was extinguished...You lit the flame...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you....
Thank you... My Lover... My Friend...

I was unseren; You brought me serenity...
I was cold & callused; You broke the walls...
I was uncontrollable; You tamed me...
I was violent; You brought me such peace...
I was insecure; In you I found security...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover My friend...
Thank You...


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Thank You

Contributed by skyblumoon on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I was hungry; You gave me nourishment...
I was thirsty; You quenched it...
I was unloved; You cherished me...
I was friendless; You gave me companionship...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was ungrateful; From you I learned gratitude...
I was living in darkness; You brought me the light...
I was hateful; From you I learned about love...
I was mean; From you I learned about kindness...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was angry; You taught me to laugh...
I cried a tear; You dried it...
I thought I was ugly; You showed me what true beauty is...
I was sexless; You made love to me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was feeling ignored; You gave me attention...
I was sad; You brought me so much happiness...
I was tough; You gave me such tenderness...
I was hard hearted; You softened my soul...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was damn right rude; You taught me manners...
I was with out humor; From you I learned to joke...
I was blind to others feelings; From you I learned insight...
I was alone; You became my friend;
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

Inside I was sickened; From you I received healing...
My mind was a baffling mess; From you I learned to see my-
self as a genius...
I was unpolished; From you I learned eloquence...
I was a stammering idiot; From you I learned such grace...
I was lost; You found the real me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I had such bizarre ideas; You brought me down to earth...
I was sailing alone; You became my captain...
I was living in hell; You brought heaven to me...
I was misjudged; You didn't judge me...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend...

I was distrusting; You taught me the meaning of true justice...
I was in despair; you gave me hope...
I was in anguish; you brought me glee...
I was shallow; You me depth...
I was without sight; you gave me vision...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank you... My lover... My Friend...

I was death to others feelings; You leant me your ears...
I was feeling low; You brought me to new heights...
I was without feeling; You taught me passion...
I was cold; You gave me warmth...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover... My Friend....

My life was without meaning; You gave me a reason to live...
I was fragile; You gave me strength...
I thought I wanted for nothing; You gave me a desire for
all of life...
I was egotistical; You humbled me...
I was with out trust; You taught me to have faith...
I was so little without you;
I've became so much with you...
Thank you... My Lover... My friend...

I was crazy; You restored me to sanity...
I was crying; You brought me comfort...
My heart was broken; You put it on the mend...
The fire in my soul was extinguished...You lit the flame...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you....
Thank you... My Lover... My Friend...

I was unseren; You brought me serenity...
I was cold & callused; You broke the walls...
I was uncontrollable; You tamed me...
I was violent; You brought me such peace...
I was insecure; In you I found security...
I was so little without you...
I've became so much with you...
Thank You... My Lover My friend...
Thank You...






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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:53:17 PM AEST
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incredible : ) thats all i can say. glad ur lifes going so good, hope it all stays perfect .sooze xxxx


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:54:45 PM AEST
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a very good if somewhat long poem. I
enjoyed it which was odd since I usually don't
like poems like this. It reminded me of the
Psalms and the Song of Solomon in the Bible
for some odd reason. Anyway very good
poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:33:25 PM AEST
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fantastic write. im not one to like love poems, but i liked this one. this is a fine example of how much of an influence someone can be in your life, and im glad that its the good kind in yours.


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:41:09 PM AEST
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What a lucky man to have you write something so powerful for him. You must really love him alot.
Izzy




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