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Array ( [sid] => 67384 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => gRiLlEd ChEeSe [time] => 2004-10-14 07:24:33 [hometext] => This poem was inspired by my dad who asked me if i wanted some grilled cheese. It is based on the things i heard people say over the course of the day. People say some strange things... [bodytext] => weakness and kindness

everything is not yet lost

beauty in the deep of things

face to the sky

you're so hot the sun is jealous

nothing else matters

nothing compares to you

bored in life

some one's lieing to you

she was late

you promise

thank you

the numbers been changed

you're dumb

he's a stalker

she'll give you a compliment for me

when are we leaving?

it's good to see you

i'll call you back

you want some grilled cheese?

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gRiLlEd ChEeSe

Contributed by Rxqueen on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:24:33 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

weakness and kindness

everything is not yet lost

beauty in the deep of things

face to the sky

you're so hot the sun is jealous

nothing else matters

nothing compares to you

bored in life

some one's lieing to you

she was late

you promise

thank you

the numbers been changed

you're dumb

he's a stalker

she'll give you a compliment for me

when are we leaving?

it's good to see you

i'll call you back

you want some grilled cheese?

Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-10-14 07:24:33]
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:51:19 AM AEST
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A very nice change of pace.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:53:04 AM AEST
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weird...like me, I liked it!

Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:39:59 AM AEST
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I like that you can transition from emotional slw paced poems to fast paced happy poems . Great work!

Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:18:38 AM AEST
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Wow, people say a lot of nice things to you, "you're so hot the sun is jealous." Wow, i get more along the lines of, "you're dumb." All I hope is that grilled cheese was very good.

Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:35:06 PM AEST
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I loved the line 'you're so hot the sun is jealous.' Sounds like a pick-up line that a guy would use in a bar-lol.

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