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Array ( [sid] => 6738 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Jealous Physco [time] => 2002-11-15 13:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You always smile
When we were
Together
Now will you smile
As you point that gun
At me?

Went a little physco
When
I said goodbye
I guess
You thought
It was just
The booze talkin'
But it wasn't
I never was in love
With you
It was a game
And now your heart is broken
Just acomplished my goal
Guess
I won
And you lost
Is that
Why
You're going to shoot me?

Did
The voices provoke you
Or is it the acid
Again
Or
Trippin'
On another blunt
You really should stop the drugs
They kill brain cells
You know
Maybe the drugs
Killed all your sane brain cells
And drove you crazy
In this rage of jealousy
Jealousy
Are you jealous
Of her?

Jealous
Cause I moved on
Found a new girl
Went on to better things
Grow up
Maybe then
We'd still be together
But
I don't like
Inmature
Little b****es
They can't handle me
And I drop them
In the trash
Like yesterday's paper
Last night's supper
Get the hint
Get the point?

So sad
Tear
Tear
Move on
Don't shoot me
Shoot yourself
Do the world
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Jealous Physco

Contributed by ml02 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You always smile
When we were
Together
Now will you smile
As you point that gun
At me?

Went a little physco
When
I said goodbye
I guess
You thought
It was just
The booze talkin'
But it wasn't
I never was in love
With you
It was a game
And now your heart is broken
Just acomplished my goal
Guess
I won
And you lost
Is that
Why
You're going to shoot me?

Did
The voices provoke you
Or is it the acid
Again
Or
Trippin'
On another blunt
You really should stop the drugs
They kill brain cells
You know
Maybe the drugs
Killed all your sane brain cells
And drove you crazy
In this rage of jealousy
Jealousy
Are you jealous
Of her?

Jealous
Cause I moved on
Found a new girl
Went on to better things
Grow up
Maybe then
We'd still be together
But
I don't like
Inmature
Little b****es
They can't handle me
And I drop them
In the trash
Like yesterday's paper
Last night's supper
Get the hint
Get the point?

So sad
Tear
Tear
Move on
Don't shoot me
Shoot yourself
Do the world
A favor.

Copyright Â© ml02 ... [ 2002-11-15 13:00:00]
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Re: Jealous Physco (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:28:44 PM AEST
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Well this is definately bitter
Very bitter, your wishing death
upon another soul in this poem
at the end, as if that would do the
world a favor, i enjoy reading your
poems because they show me
what im glad that i dont have...
I hope this isnt how you really are
in person but if it is then good luck
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Jealous Physco (User Rating: 1 )
by ml02 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:38:22 PM AEST
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i just want to let you know, i'm really not like this. i do play games and hate inmature girls, but i'd never in real life wish death on anyone, not even an ex or whatever. its just something that kinda formulated in my head and i thought it was interesting.

Re: Jealous Physco (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 02:30:03 PM AEST
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Now mate, this poem is sick.
There are plently of poems about death.
But you don't wish death on a girl.
Especially one u were with.
so what if she does some drugs
doesn't mean she deserves to die
You obviously hurt her very deeply
and you probably were the one that drove her insane

But..... It was a very well written poem
you obvously have talent
I hope this was fictional
but it does not seem so
anyways keep em coming
maybe happier poems though!

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