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Array ( [sid] => 6736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ardor [time] => 2002-11-15 12:20:00 [hometext] => I was totally in love with this guy. This poem is literally my heart on paper. When we were dating, we were both getting into end time prophecy. So what you are about to read is a little of that mixed in with everything I felt about him. His favorite color is electric blue. [bodytext] => Observing the majestic poise of your noble face as I look behind to see what truly is kind
Eternally, you have aided me externally to see inside
One of few words, I could take you there in less
Would you wait with me for that darkest hour, when the world knows chaotic as you and I see now?
I could take the vigor of your bright investigating mind
And drown the drive in pure amour and devotion of you
My love, I could
Without trial
Now I want to take you through electric blue
For I shall withdrawl my voice no longer [comments] => 3 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Elisabeth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Ardor

Contributed by Elisabeth on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Observing the majestic poise of your noble face as I look behind to see what truly is kind
Eternally, you have aided me externally to see inside
One of few words, I could take you there in less
Would you wait with me for that darkest hour, when the world knows chaotic as you and I see now?
I could take the vigor of your bright investigating mind
And drown the drive in pure amour and devotion of you
My love, I could
Without trial
Now I want to take you through electric blue
For I shall withdrawl my voice no longer




Copyright © Elisabeth ... [ 2002-11-15 12:20:00]
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Re: Ardor (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I liked it.

Ginnie


Re: Ardor (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:23:38 PM AEST
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Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
Thanks for sharing this one
I really enjoyed it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Ardor (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:47:22 PM AEST
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Amazingly beautiful....I'm truly speechless
Take Care

Blessings
Love, Jenna




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