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Just wanted to let you know everything im saying is true,

I know lately, i havent been acting right,

I try to pray to you before i go to bed everynight,

Everytime i needed you, you was always there,

I know youre watching me from up above and you do care,

Im sorry for all the bad things that i did,

Im sorry for all the bad things that i said,

I hope youll please forgive me, and come into my heart,

I want to be close to you instead of being apart

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Dear God

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:00:16 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Dear God i really need to talk to you,

Just wanted to let you know everything im saying is true,

I know lately, i havent been acting right,

I try to pray to you before i go to bed everynight,

Everytime i needed you, you was always there,

I know youre watching me from up above and you do care,

Im sorry for all the bad things that i did,

Im sorry for all the bad things that i said,

I hope youll please forgive me, and come into my heart,

I want to be close to you instead of being apart

Copyright © Jenn2004 ... [ 2004-10-14 00:00:16]
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Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:06:42 AM AEST
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This poem is sweet, cute.

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:06:43 AM AEST
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hai member, i love this poem you surender is total and you will really have your words answered. read my poem on this site titled ONE GOD. this poem symbolises the protection that god grants his devotees. also read my poem GAYATRI MANTRA. I have got many blessings by chanting this mantra. try and you will also succeed. god is not different by religion.

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:11:06 AM AEST
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this is a beautifull sincere prayer to God. I don't do religion but I'm definently into God and I know without a doubt that God has honered your humble prayer. Jus take it one day at a time and accept God's forgiveness and now forgive your self.
I f u fall jus know that we're all human and God forgives ore and ore.
Hang tuff and beleive that god luvs u and accepts u as his own.
Very beautifull prayer that touvhes God's heart as it ouches mine and will touch others.
luv, hugs, smiles,
emy

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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Good poem. Good prayer. God bless.

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 09:43:06 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful..and so sincere......
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:43:09 PM AEST
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Hey Jenn. What's up?
This is really good.
I feel the same way

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