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self titled
Contributed by
Spyke_420
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Drip Drip Drip
The blood drips down my arm onto the floor
Soon insted of just a couple of drops there's a small lake of blood
Soon I will drowned in the lake
Like so many othere have
Copyright ©
Spyke_420
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2004-10-13 22:44:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: self titled
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldthunny17 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:02:59 PM AEST (User
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This is a really deep poem for its length. Good writing. |
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Re: self titled
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldthunny17 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:21:25 PM AEST (User
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This is a really deep poem for its length. Good writing. |
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Re: self titled
(User Rating: 1 ) by screwup on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:03:37 AM AEST (User
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really short, but I like it... good job and keep your head up... I'm going thru much of the same...
take care
Deanna |
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