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Array ( [sid] => 6733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => PHASE [time] => 2002-11-15 11:20:00 [hometext] => TO all with BIPOLAR. [bodytext] => i know,
you just want to go,
but hey,
you can stay,
stay awhile withe me,
youll see,
its ok,
i know the demons,
there deep inside,
you get so tired,
then you want to hide,
but its ok,
were just the same,
ive been there to,
you become another person,
until
until you come back to you
you go inside that place,
where nothing is for real,
you go inside that place,
that only wants to steal,
steal the thoughts you have,
deep inside your mind,
steeling all the love,
that makes a you want to shine,
it comes so quick,
taking you away,
raping you of soul this horrible phase,self medication,
notime for meditation,
a phase that makes no sense,
a phase that makes you tense,
so tense,
i dont know many more,
is anything for real,
these are the questions,
this is how i feel,but deep down inide,
i only want to heal,
i only want to heal [comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 43 [informant] => radicalme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

PHASE

Contributed by radicalme on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i know,
you just want to go,
but hey,
you can stay,
stay awhile withe me,
youll see,
its ok,
i know the demons,
there deep inside,
you get so tired,
then you want to hide,
but its ok,
were just the same,
ive been there to,
you become another person,
until
until you come back to you
you go inside that place,
where nothing is for real,
you go inside that place,
that only wants to steal,
steal the thoughts you have,
deep inside your mind,
steeling all the love,
that makes a you want to shine,
it comes so quick,
taking you away,
raping you of soul this horrible phase,self medication,
notime for meditation,
a phase that makes no sense,
a phase that makes you tense,
so tense,
i dont know many more,
is anything for real,
these are the questions,
this is how i feel,but deep down inide,
i only want to heal,
i only want to heal

Copyright Â© radicalme ... [ 2002-11-15 11:20:00]
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Re: PHASE (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:09:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful, absolutely beautiful
My daughter is Bipolar so i can
relate to this one alot, thanks for
sharing this one it's beautiful
and so true . Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: PHASE (User Rating: 1 )
by radicalme on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:25:01 PM AEST
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oreo,thank you for replying to several of my poems.poetry is my life.i want to reach out to people by sharing my writings.im 29 years of age and have battled severe bipolar and skitzophrenia,first found when i was five.ive been writing sense i was about seven.until this year my poems were untold,a freind incouraged me.i grew up with a very hard life.like many of us.thank you once again.i am going to look for some poetry submitted by you.email me some time if you wish.
radicalme@alltel.net

Re: PHASE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:47:33 PM AEST
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This is tottally awesome!!!!!!
I can relate. a Dr. finally found the write med for me, thank God.
Before Dr's put me on Zoloft, I'd been thru counsling ever med on the market when I was younger...I still have mood swings and have to tell the suicide demon to go to hell but
I've only been on the med for two years but I can cope much better now.
Mine was 'caused from a genetic disorder (para thyroid hormone dysfuction) .After the Dr. removed the messed up gland, I awoke from surjury a new but scared person. See after being ruled by uncontrolable emotions, I had to start dealing with reality.
They just found out before my suujury that it's gentic. See both my parents died from cancer so in reality it was in Dad's and Mom's Gens.
Mine went un diognosed for twenty something years....It's what eventually took my mom with meanoma cancer in 1979.. I'm a walking miracle, 1. "cause of God, Dr's and family and friends praying for me. Ofcourse dad and Mom are my angels and they certainly watch over me..
Sorry didn't mean to write a book but I feel there are many out there that can be helped if they only new......I slipped thru the cracks for twenty something years....Anyway I'm on a mission to help others be aware. It's nothing to fear if more Dr's knew.
It's found by checking calcium in the blood. If one's calcium is too hig then that's usually the reason why.....I still have three working glands . Even if they had to take all the glands it's o.k. 'cause one can take calcium by mouth.
If anyone has any question my e-mail is emystar@msn.com
By the way your poem will help so many people out here....I know My luved one's had a hard time before the surgeon chande my life and gave me a nice chin tuck too.

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