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Devious Scheme
Contributed by
skyblumoon
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:11:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Through the forest of,
Broken promises!
Down the Road of,
Despair!
Through the river of,
Tears!
Down the street of,
Loneliness!
Through the clouds of,
Misplaced dreams!
Down the path of,
Heartaches!
Answer me this?
Was that all a part of your,
Devious scheme?
Through the heartache of,
All those lies!
Through the pain of,
All those tales!
Through the tears of,
All those alibi's!
Through the forest of,
Broken promises!
Down the road of,
Despair!
Through the river of,
Tears!
Down the street of,
Loneliness!
Through the clouds of,
Misplaced dreams!
Down the path of,
Heartaches!
Answer me this?
Was that all a part of your,
Devious scheme?
Through the torment of,
All those long lonely nights!
Though the yearning of,
My empty arms!
Through the pain of,
Being abandoned!
Through the forest of,
Broken promises!
Down the road of,
Despair!
Through the river of,
Tears!
Down the street of,
Loneliness!
Through the clouds of,
Misplaced dreams!
Down the path of,
Heartaches!
Answer me this?
Was that all a part of your,
Devious scheme?
Thoughts going through my head,
About things you've said!
Moments in my mind,
About things we used to do!
Memories in my soul,
About loving you!
Through the forest of,
Broken promises!
Down the road of,
Despair!
Through the river of,
Tears!
Down the street of,
Loneliness!
Through the clouds of,
Misplaced dreams!
Down the path of
Heartaches!
Answer me this?
Was that all of your,
Devious scheme?
My heart is breaking,
Over losing you!
My soul is crumbling,
Now that you're gone!
No more embers in my life,
For you've extinguished the flame!
Through the forest of'
Broken promises!
Down the road to,
Despair!
Through the river of,
Tears!
Down the street of,
Loneliness!
Through the clouds of,
Misplaced dreams!
Down the path of,
Heartaches!
Answer me this?
Was that all a part of your,
Devious scheme?
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skyblumoon
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Re: Devious Scheme
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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Very emotional but great poem. I can relate.
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Re: Devious Scheme
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by izzy on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:23:41 PM AEST
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My favorite line is the clouds of misplaced dreams. Never give up your dreams.
Love
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Re: Devious Scheme
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:53:16 PM AEST
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| exclamation marks are used for emotion, but you dont need to use one every other line to convey it. your words should be enough with a simple period and an exclamtion point every now and then. with your excessive use, there really was no emphasis after seeing them so often and it just became redudantly annoying. |
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Re: Devious Scheme
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:42:10 AM AEST
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This was an emotional yet powerful write. I can relate to it on a personal level.
~:: darkangeleyes57 ::~ |
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