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Array ( [sid] => 67209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A letter never sent [time] => 2004-10-13 01:39:59 [hometext] => i wrote this tonight, because i'm in pain this is what i need him to know...but too foolish to send...because i doubt he cares...comment if you would like...the words of friends really do help [bodytext] => I sat here today and thought of you, how could we know our love wasn't true
we gave eachother our hearts, but somewhere along the line it all got screwed up,
you had your thing and i had mine, seems we simply didn't have the time,
i didn't have the patience to wait for you to come around so in my foolish ways
i pushed you too far...i don't know if i will ever love anyone the way i love you
but deep down i guess we are both to blame for losing what we had.
I had to have my way and that just made you mad.
but how can you just walk away after so much time has past
there were times when i know i was too much to handle.
but they are the times i really needed the one i loved.
The one who said he loved me.
well i guess the fool was me
this is a letter i will never send,
and how it hurts me to not have you.
I know that it was just too much to ask for you to understand
how much i needed you to be there for me.
how i have lost so much, its only right that i lose you too.
but at least i know your still alive, i just hope that one day you will understand
that i didn't mean for it to be this way,
but i can't beg you to stay
you've said what you did, you didn't have to be so mean,
if just once you would of looked and seen
that i was falling apart, and didn't know what to do...
all i wanted was a little comfort from you.
after all when you love some one thats what you do.
so i'm ending this letter with tears in my eyes.
since i'm sure i'm the only one who has cried...
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A letter never sent

Contributed by brokenwings on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:39:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sat here today and thought of you, how could we know our love wasn't true
we gave eachother our hearts, but somewhere along the line it all got screwed up,
you had your thing and i had mine, seems we simply didn't have the time,
i didn't have the patience to wait for you to come around so in my foolish ways
i pushed you too far...i don't know if i will ever love anyone the way i love you
but deep down i guess we are both to blame for losing what we had.
I had to have my way and that just made you mad.
but how can you just walk away after so much time has past
there were times when i know i was too much to handle.
but they are the times i really needed the one i loved.
The one who said he loved me.
well i guess the fool was me
this is a letter i will never send,
and how it hurts me to not have you.
I know that it was just too much to ask for you to understand
how much i needed you to be there for me.
how i have lost so much, its only right that i lose you too.
but at least i know your still alive, i just hope that one day you will understand
that i didn't mean for it to be this way,
but i can't beg you to stay
you've said what you did, you didn't have to be so mean,
if just once you would of looked and seen
that i was falling apart, and didn't know what to do...
all i wanted was a little comfort from you.
after all when you love some one thats what you do.
so i'm ending this letter with tears in my eyes.
since i'm sure i'm the only one who has cried...




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-10-13 01:39:59]
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Re: A letter never sent (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:57:37 AM AEST
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Hey its sad the my comment is th efirst to be posted this is a really great write and i love you name brokenwings thats how i feel sometimes i posted some new poems today i think you might like to read

again this is a great write and he really is not worthy of someone who could write this to him

well take care


Re: A letter never sent (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:48:38 AM AEST
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I hope you felt better for getting this out, your pain really does show it's face in this writ,e I am sorry for your pain,

pixie xx


Re: A letter never sent (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:10:22 PM AEST
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Listen it would have never of hurt to send this out because he mite even care




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