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The words we said to each other
were music to our ears
Some so passionately beautiful
brought us close to tears

As we held one another closely
touching the tender spots
Our bodies reacting instantly
releasing all the knots

Passionate love upon us
the feelings were unreal
What more could we ask for
then what we both could feel

An unbelievable love
that has grown more and more
Something that both of us
had never felt before

I adore this lovely lady
as she adores me
All the time we spend together
happier we could not be

We cherish every minute
and hope to find a way
To spend more time together
and not just for a day [comments] => 5 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Your Words and Mine 2

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:01:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The words we said to each other
were music to our ears
Some so passionately beautiful
brought us close to tears

As we held one another closely
touching the tender spots
Our bodies reacting instantly
releasing all the knots

Passionate love upon us
the feelings were unreal
What more could we ask for
then what we both could feel

An unbelievable love
that has grown more and more
Something that both of us
had never felt before

I adore this lovely lady
as she adores me
All the time we spend together
happier we could not be

We cherish every minute
and hope to find a way
To spend more time together
and not just for a day

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-10-13 01:01:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Words and Mine 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:07:54 AM AEST
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very lovely Bruce
Michelle

Re: Your Words and Mine 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:09:35 AM AEST
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Such a beautifully tender poem and written with such intense passion, It made me feel privalidged to be able to behold such such intense beauty such as this poem.

Re: Your Words and Mine 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:13:00 AM AEST
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Very beautifull words to be cherished.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Your Words and Mine 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:45:57 AM AEST
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A lovely poem Bruce full of love and passion for your lady

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Your Words and Mine 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:49:41 AM AEST
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lovely and ahhhhhhh so very sweet *hugs*

pixie xx

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