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Array ( [sid] => 67200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Haiku [time] => 2004-10-12 23:08:59 [hometext] => Four Haiku I've written...I didn't want to seperate them because, well I'm weird [bodytext] => ~Night~
The night dank and dark
Holds secrets form the world, thoughts
No one tells a soul

~Twilight~
Twilight so serene
The sky in shades of blue, to
Calm the mind and soul

~Life~
Life so dull and gray
Must live through it yet again
As time fades on by

~School~
School bells ring aloud
Pushing my way through the crowd
To get home from school [comments] => 10 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 17 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Haiku )

Haiku

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

~Night~
The night dank and dark
Holds secrets form the world, thoughts
No one tells a soul

~Twilight~
Twilight so serene
The sky in shades of blue, to
Calm the mind and soul

~Life~
Life so dull and gray
Must live through it yet again
As time fades on by

~School~
School bells ring aloud
Pushing my way through the crowd
To get home from school

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-10-12 23:08:59]
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Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:46:09 PM AEST
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Very good works.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:12:47 AM AEST
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Beautifully written and a cool poem, and you are not weird, you write really emotional wrtes and they are so cool to read.

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:44:26 AM AEST
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A very unique poem I must say. A wonderful way of writing a poem :-) That's good!

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:56:46 AM AEST
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Very nice series and good peeks into your life!
Hugs,
Hur

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:22:32 AM AEST
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It worked, and flowed with each a differ meaning. Liked all.......~

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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Excellent poem Kie different yet wonderful

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:58:56 AM AEST
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very good haikus, I loved em :)

pixie xx

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:24:58 PM AEST
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Each piece is uniquely well done,
however all 4 seem to create a theme as well.
Nice job!

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:56:53 PM AEST
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excellent haikus =]

Re: Haiku (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 05:56:15 PM AEST
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They're really good, Kiela. Haiku is sometimes makes it hard to express one's self. You made it look easy.

Take care,

Tim

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