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Array ( [sid] => 67189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Choices [time] => 2004-10-12 22:09:37 [hometext] => FOR MY GIRLFRIEND, MEGAN, WHO KEEPS ME GROUNDED... [bodytext] => As i shield my eyes from the glaring sun,
my vision is cut by this roller-coaster
called Life.
Stepping back, holding out; this crazy
thing is too intimidating, unrelentless in its
pursuit of happiness and joy. Careening
much too close to the edge for my taste,
the wild beast is almost out of view
when my eyes fall upon you.
Such a glorious image, even better
under the friday night lights.
Instantly i feel lifted by the butterflies
that now possess me, but soothing the
tension is your radiant smile and
beautiful personality.
The rhythm of your body rocks me
like an epiphony, and i reach out
at the last second before the coaster
roars by. Landing next to you, I
realize sometimes you have to throw
it all out and hop on for the ride;
Life, for the moment, isn't so bad.

-The Raven- [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 55 [informant] => theraven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Choices

Contributed by theraven on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:09:37 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

As i shield my eyes from the glaring sun,
my vision is cut by this roller-coaster
called Life.
Stepping back, holding out; this crazy
thing is too intimidating, unrelentless in its
pursuit of happiness and joy. Careening
much too close to the edge for my taste,
the wild beast is almost out of view
when my eyes fall upon you.
Such a glorious image, even better
under the friday night lights.
Instantly i feel lifted by the butterflies
that now possess me, but soothing the
tension is your radiant smile and
beautiful personality.
The rhythm of your body rocks me
like an epiphony, and i reach out
at the last second before the coaster
roars by. Landing next to you, I
realize sometimes you have to throw
it all out and hop on for the ride;
Life, for the moment, isn't so bad.

-The Raven-

Copyright © theraven ... [ 2004-10-12 22:09:37]
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Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:24:14 AM AEST
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An awesome dedication to a friend and lover, may your relationship stay true for ever, cool enjoyed reading it.

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