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Array ( [sid] => 67161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Intertwined Spirits [time] => 2004-10-12 18:47:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => To say that I know you would be a thought understated
You are my breath
My thinking
My heartbeat

You are my spirit guide
My awakening
My love

You are the answer to all the questions that hold my mind captive
The whisper I have been following, but could never find

You are the reason for my existence
The fulcrum that my spirit has been in search of all these years

I will grasp onto you and follow you
I will dedicate my heart you,
Every attentive beat holds your secret code
The magic to my existence

You have created me
I am your intensity
Do you feel me?
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Intertwined Spirits

Contributed by Hopeless_Romantic on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To say that I know you would be a thought understated
You are my breath
My thinking
My heartbeat

You are my spirit guide
My awakening
My love

You are the answer to all the questions that hold my mind captive
The whisper I have been following, but could never find

You are the reason for my existence
The fulcrum that my spirit has been in search of all these years

I will grasp onto you and follow you
I will dedicate my heart you,
Every attentive beat holds your secret code
The magic to my existence

You have created me
I am your intensity
Do you feel me?

Copyright © Hopeless_Romantic ... [ 2004-10-12 18:47:47]
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Re: Intertwined Spirits (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:00:29 PM AEST
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Nicely done. The very last line had a lot of impact on me.

Re: Intertwined Spirits (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:14:51 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull masterpeice of two spirits.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Intertwined Spirits (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:12:24 AM AEST
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Very beautiful!
Your words melted my heart. Romance in motion

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Intertwined Spirits (User Rating: 1 )
by poetryman30 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:02:32 PM AEST
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Wow...this is intense..for a man to have this kind of effect on a woman is almost too much to imagine.
My search would be at an end and I would have found my soul mate if ever I find this woman.
Excellent writing, H_R...you are so truly talented...PM30 :-)

Re: Intertwined Spirits (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:44:27 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net....
This is an awesome poem... very intense and deep.... Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Jenni

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