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Fake Reality
Contributed by
silverjade
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 02:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Thoughts
meaningless thoughts
why do they drown me?
Iam I that vulnerable?
Iam I that innocent?,
it still runs throught my veins,
but they disguise themselves
becoming one of them
Iam just another face in the crowd
another mindless mind in an ocean of wisdom
I become one of them!
Iam I that meaningless?
is this all fake?
if so then awake i want to remain,
dont make me go in there
where reality meets its end.
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silverjade
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2004-10-12 14:41:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fake Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by shadows on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:10:35 PM AEST (User
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I like the idea that reality is all fake, good write. |
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Re: Fake Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:42:17 PM AEST (User
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very nice poem |
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Re: Fake Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jrtoews on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:25:31 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed your poem I dont know exactly what you were writeing about but to me when i read it i felt as though you were saying that you overanalyze things and htat you think your mind and thoughts and smarts are not being appreciated and people dont know how bright you really are but i might think that it means that because thats exactly how i feel on a daily basis |
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Re: Fake Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jrtoews on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed your poem I dont know exactly what you were writeing about but to me when i read it i felt as though you were saying that you overanalyze things and htat you think your mind and thoughts and smarts are not being appreciated and people dont know how bright you really are but i might think that it means that because thats exactly how i feel on a daily basis |
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