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Array ( [sid] => 67101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Heart Is Crumbling [time] => 2004-10-12 10:12:19 [hometext] => I wrote this after I broke-up with my boyfreind [bodytext] => Sitting at my window
I look out & see
A cold & cruel world looking back at me.
Raindrops on the window sill
Teardrops in my eyes
Limbs lying broken on the ground.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Like a witch over her brew
You cast a spell on me.
Throwing anything you could at me,
Just to get me in your grasp,
To sink your claws into my flesh.
While all the while,
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Your love is like a double edged sword
Deceiving & dangerous.
Your lying words are like a razor's edge, sharp & biting
Your touch is like daggers piercing my soul
Causing me to bleed.
While all the while,
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

The coldness of your smile is etched in my mind
The hollowness of your laughter is echoing in my ears.
The callouness of your heart is breaking mine.
The hardening of your soul is crushing me,
Causing me great sadness & many tears.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

The time I've wasted on you.
The things you've put me through.
Like the waters edge your shallow.
Like a well run dry your empty.
Oh the awful turmoil you've left me in.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Like a great lighting bolt,
The power of your anger.
The meanness of your words.
The strength of your blows.
The humiliation I've suffered at your hands.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Moses parted the Red Sea,
Like you've torn apart my dreams of a future with you.
The bush is extinguished
So is my passion & desire that I once had for you,
That burned out of control like a wildfire.
Now all I have left is ashes & shame.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands.

Just like Jesus returned to heaven
My feelings for you have went away
Along with the memories of you.
I care for you no more.
You've plaughed me with you're lies.
You've raped me of my senses.
I have nothing left inside of me, but guilt & remorse over loving you.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

You've blinded me with your evil wicked ways
You've led me down the road to disappear.
You've given me no reason to believe in a future
Only reasons to say goodbye.
You've crucified my love,
You took it all but the pain of losing of you.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling your hands...

Like the roses
You're sexy smile and sweet scent
Lured me to you.
But like the thorns of a rose puncture your finger,
You've punctured my heart.
There's no more me
Only a shell of the person I used to be.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands....

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My Heart Is Crumbling

Contributed by skyblumoon on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:12:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Sitting at my window
I look out & see
A cold & cruel world looking back at me.
Raindrops on the window sill
Teardrops in my eyes
Limbs lying broken on the ground.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Like a witch over her brew
You cast a spell on me.
Throwing anything you could at me,
Just to get me in your grasp,
To sink your claws into my flesh.
While all the while,
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Your love is like a double edged sword
Deceiving & dangerous.
Your lying words are like a razor's edge, sharp & biting
Your touch is like daggers piercing my soul
Causing me to bleed.
While all the while,
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

The coldness of your smile is etched in my mind
The hollowness of your laughter is echoing in my ears.
The callouness of your heart is breaking mine.
The hardening of your soul is crushing me,
Causing me great sadness & many tears.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

The time I've wasted on you.
The things you've put me through.
Like the waters edge your shallow.
Like a well run dry your empty.
Oh the awful turmoil you've left me in.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Like a great lighting bolt,
The power of your anger.
The meanness of your words.
The strength of your blows.
The humiliation I've suffered at your hands.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

Moses parted the Red Sea,
Like you've torn apart my dreams of a future with you.
The bush is extinguished
So is my passion & desire that I once had for you,
That burned out of control like a wildfire.
Now all I have left is ashes & shame.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands.

Just like Jesus returned to heaven
My feelings for you have went away
Along with the memories of you.
I care for you no more.
You've plaughed me with you're lies.
You've raped me of my senses.
I have nothing left inside of me, but guilt & remorse over loving you.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands...

You've blinded me with your evil wicked ways
You've led me down the road to disappear.
You've given me no reason to believe in a future
Only reasons to say goodbye.
You've crucified my love,
You took it all but the pain of losing of you.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling your hands...

Like the roses
You're sexy smile and sweet scent
Lured me to you.
But like the thorns of a rose puncture your finger,
You've punctured my heart.
There's no more me
Only a shell of the person I used to be.
While all the while
My heart is crumbling in your hands....





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Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:15:29 AM AEST
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a very moving and dark write, a great show of emotions here,

pixie xx


Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by Apardame on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:28:06 AM AEST
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This is a very deep poem. It made me look back on my past feelings with my break-ups. Wonderful write!


Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:18:51 AM AEST
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Strong piece with vivid imagery
Nice work

Steve


Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:34:52 PM AEST
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Very sad, but moving write.

Spazzo


Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:18:32 PM AEST
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very nice....very emotional and sad....i loved it...great write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: My Heart Is Crumbling (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:53:20 PM AEST
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Man oh man girl what power. This is emotinal. I love it. This is one your best by far.
Izzy




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