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[aid] => mick
[title] => Me
[time] => 2004-10-11 20:54:16
[hometext] => One of my longest BUT my own personal favorite, its my life, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT!!! It would mean alot to me
[bodytext] => I wish they made a movie about me it would star Cameron diaz Or maybe a no name blonde It would have music my Eminem and a storyline to die for cause see a story about me it would be quite sad i guess or maybe very uplifting help those who cut or cry im a smalltown girl with a mom and a dad they divorced, i was sad my daddy cheated with a friend oh well he hit me when he drank anyway but then he quite oh the story has a small twist he left my mom got sad, drank, did drugs alot of people did that she told me i was fat at 115 pounds she told me i was a bum "get a job, your such a whore" she sent me away after she found out i got high with my dad then she found out i cut alot, my arms, my legs, my fat stomach, then she found out i had sex alot to get away from my problems like her at home oh good! all good movies need sex right? i raised my sister, while i was gone my mother took over my sister is a user now since i got sent away i came home from the hospital and thought all was great, Dad drank no more booze, so i was so happy 1 year later 17 years old almost get to leave mother's home it looks like the end to the story, but not yet!! i moved in with a guy just to get out of there she was still a jerk tellin me i was so wrong so messed up in the head "oh i had hated her" she'd say "oh i did so much for you" what a lie! I lived with a boy at barley 17, i finally was free then that ended as fast as can be a year, i was 18, got my lisance its the party time for this story line the story grows thick as we see something here the star shows us something the bad girl side of women you see in this no one wants a bad girl they like to play, they like to dabble but never keep a bad girl liveing in her car, but still staying in school haveing sex for food and shower doing bad things just to live life down in the dumps in a gutter See here is the climax, it ends in moments She finds her tru love, he takes her in, cleans her up tames the wild girl marrige is soon, a home, a little dog Daddy finds a girlfriend, she loves her so unlike her mom ever could the star is truly happy, has a mom, a dad, a love money is tight, but hey thats life this is the end, dont u think i need a movie? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 21 [informant] => lessa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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