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Array ( [sid] => 6703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => you act as if [time] => 2002-11-15 05:00:00 [hometext] => the way my mum thinks im perfectly fine... until its too late... [bodytext] => you act as if im peachy,
but you never saw the pain
you always said you knew me
im not like everyone else. im insane.

you act as if im fine
nothing could possibly go wrong.
you never saw the tears of mine
you said i was okay for so long...

but then how did this happen?
how did the occur?
my real thought i never did defend.
my life was like a gasian blur.

you act as if ill wake up
but you know deep down its not true
all your anger and sadness will epupt.
when your eyes see the truth from the blue.

im gone now, get over it.
live with it.
forget about it
its all explicit. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 13 [informant] => frozensuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

you act as if

Contributed by frozensuicide on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

you act as if im peachy,
but you never saw the pain
you always said you knew me
im not like everyone else. im insane.

you act as if im fine
nothing could possibly go wrong.
you never saw the tears of mine
you said i was okay for so long...

but then how did this happen?
how did the occur?
my real thought i never did defend.
my life was like a gasian blur.

you act as if ill wake up
but you know deep down its not true
all your anger and sadness will epupt.
when your eyes see the truth from the blue.

im gone now, get over it.
live with it.
forget about it
its all explicit.

Copyright Â© frozensuicide ... [ 2002-11-15 05:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you act as if (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:41:27 AM AEST
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This is so sad, when you
stop and think about it , it is hard
for people to see really how one
feels without them sharing what's
wrong or on their mind, but alot of
people are blind and don't try or take
the time to see if someone is hurting
or in pain either, This poem really
hit home with me, thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: you act as if (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:49:07 AM AEST
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A lot of feeling went into this very touching write! Christina

Re: you act as if (User Rating: 1 )
by crucifixioncross on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:25:57 AM AEST
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omg i relate to this so much. noone asks if im ok either and i really think everyone wants me to kill myself just so im not in the way anymore. my own brother ill tell a story about what he did yesterday.

we were drivin in the car, me him and his gf and she was not talkin so he asked her if anything was wrong...i said ' you never ask me if anythings wrong' and he turns around and says because i dont care about you and when he turned around i just started crying my eyes out and he didnt even care!

emotional poem is all i have to say very emotional and it hit home with me so much so im glad i got the chance to read such a great write, keep em up

-crucifixioncross

Re: you act as if (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:07:32 AM AEST
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it's hard to tell someone what your feeling, especially when you think they should already know. sometimes people just can't see the pain, it's hidden away from those that have never experienced what you are feeling.

Re: you act as if (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 02:22:06 AM AEST
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OMG! that was sooooooooooo deep ...i know what ur goin thru....my mum doesn't no that i'm breakin inside either.....lots of luv from a life-recked teen reader.....:*(

Re: you act as if (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:36:49 AM AEST
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The way you explain things in this poem is really good, I'm sorry you feel the way you do, Its not a good feeling to want to die, I wont give you a sob story about me, But I understand what it feels like. Good write.

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